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i only completed my pri 6 education so pls bear with my terrible english.
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Updates to the story will be slow..i can only spend 20mins each day writing so pls bear with me on e slow progress..
1)Pls note. Story is based on actual events..only names n places has been changed to protect the identities of those involved.
so the story goes..
Yr 2005
fresh out of nsf at 20 yrs old, I managed to land a job as a server at a high class nightclub call club infinivivi.my malaysian friend jonas have been working there for a yr plus n told me tat the salary n tips is gd compared to outside .as I’m a “new bird”..i was assign to a old bird at a less crowded section to learn the ropes..
The old bird: “alright new boy..Yr job is very simple..jus make sure everyone’s glasses r filled ..once u see an empty glass jus go in n pour ok?”
Me: Erm mm. .how I know Wat they drinking? Anyhow also can meh?"
Old bird : “aiya..this rm very simple de..all the customers n gals drink brandy with ice water..mummy drink whiskey on e rocks..ok??? "
Me : “okok…u watch me do..if I do wrong u come in help me hor..”
Old bird : “okok…”
So I went into the room n started to pour drinks for everyone…customers de glass pour first…okok.. then mummy’s one… ok..done.. .now the prc char bo s….done…
phew… tat wasn’t as hard as I tot…smiling to myself..i was about to exit the room when she walked in…….
tbc. …
Dressed in a long sleeve dark blue uniform with matching pants…i was taken aback by her appearance.wow…this woman is beautiful…other than e word beautiful..i dunno how else to describe her.. .hmm. ..is she a mummy? Or customer? Surely she can’t be a gal with e way she dress..hmm..should I………
Martell promotor: “Oei!!! Daydreaming ar.?!?!! U r blocking my way leh…”
I snapped out of my day dreaming n immediately begin to apologise…
me: “sry sry sry…i. ..i. ..erm..I’m new here… Can I get u a drink? "
The old bird chiong in n immediately say.. “sry Janice. ..he’s new…come come I pour u yr drink…”
Hmm. Janice. .her name is janice.
tbc….
English is terrible is not a problem. After posting 1 part of the story, mia for a few days is a big big problem.
Camp here for more update. TS keep ur story cuming.
Posting part 1 then mia for few days also not that big problem.
Posting till super duper high moment, then insert commercial break before coming back days later, then big problem. Readers problem. Erected dick + blue balls.
I found out from e old bird later janice is the Martell promotor in our nightclub..at 26 yrs old.. she’s e most popular n most beautiful promotor among all the promotor station island wide in all e Martell endorsed nightclubs..
Old bird : " aiya.. u no chance one lah.. u so young… somemore she very “dao” one… so many customers so rich n powerful aim her..even all e captains n xiao di try to ask her out after work but nobody succeed b4..
me: “reli ar? Wow…or got somebody “bao” her aldy??? Married or not??
Old bird : " u go n ask lah..n remember hor…she drinks 1 pax Martell with only 2 cubes of ice..give her more than tat n u will forever be in her blacklist..n u can kiss yr tips goodbye..”
Me: wah.. like tat one ar?? Okok.. i will take note of tat..
so the night went on n soon the customer had asked for the bill..
Me: “sir..the bill will be $1038..u paying by cash or card sir?”
Customer :" take my card.. n ask janice to come in…"
Me: “sure..jus a moment sir..”
I went out of room n ask my old bird where to find janice…
old bird: “think she’s in rm 388.. u go there see have or not.if dun have ask cashier to call her…”
So I went over to rm 388…outside e room..i could see my friend jonas n another server peeking into e room n whispering excitedly to each other…
me : oei bro! Wat u all seeing? Got free show ar?? Btw.. the Martell promotor in the room???
Jonas : wah…u come right time..faster come n see…
i looked into the room n got a shock!
The customer inside was a bald n ugly man in his fifties.. n he was pawing my dream gal!!!
He was grabbing her boobs from e outside with his left hand n trying very hard to put the other hand into her pants…she was struggling to wriggle free but seems no match for tat lecher..others in e room was jus pretending not to take notice.. wtf?!!?!
Me :Oei.. jonas!! Y u dun go in n save her? Cb.. how can like tat???
Jonas: oei bro.. jus see free show lah..These type of rich customers we cannot afford to offend de lah..somemore the mummy inside.. she will take care her de lah..
Me: ……
hmm… nb…Wat should i do now??? B4 I could even decide wat to do next..the customer suddenly forced my angel onto e sofa n pinned her down n with one swift motion , took out his lanjiao n begin pushing it towards her mouth..
nb ccb. .. i buay tahan liao…i barge into e room without knocking, went straight up to the customer n pull him backwards. Oei oei sir!! Stop tat!!
Tbc…
As long as the story is exciting there shouldn’t be any problem
Brother waiting for your ‘‘continued’’
As long as we can understand what you write is enough, the most important thing is must finish the story cannot half way mia.
Yup, agree with bros here.
I do web content writing. It’s recommended that we write in primary level English so that most people can understand…
Thanks for the longer post. Up you.
thanks for contributing. there’s no need to have a master in English to write a story. supporting u bro.
The whole room went quiet…dead quiet..the ktv gals was stunned..the mummy was stunned..my angel was stunned..i was stunned…wtf did I jus do?!!?
Me : erm. .sry sir but another customer is looking for the Martell promoter..
fast forward…
the customer flew into a rage..threw brandy glasses onto the floor..kpkb…scold the mummy..the mummy lan lan..the manager came..he scold the manager…it was only after mummy n manager waive off the liquor bill n foc him 3 btls of Martell cordon bleu did he cool down but he hadn’t had his revenge with me..
customer : come come come..i very steady one…yr manager foc me 3 btls right?since u this “xiaodi” So got balls wan be hero I let u be e hero…
with tat he took 1 btl of cordon bleu n bang it hard on the table..
Customer: lai lai…you finish up i take it nothing has happen…
wtf? me? Finish up? Tap water meh??? Siao liao lah…tis time me cfm die liao..
this was when my angel spoke up..
" aiya boss..he jus a new xiaodi..dunno the rules lah…u be gracious enough to forgive him lah..to appease yr anger..i drink lah.."
She immediately pick up e btl n started to drink straight from e btl… no mixer no ice no water..pure hard liqueur. .pure brandy…she had about downed a quarter of the btl when the customer relented n ask her to stop…
Customer: K lah K lah.. enough liao lah…
tbc….