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Originally Posted by
hawkeye007
Because his father is Chinese.. Hahahaha
Actually Kamal’s father is Hokkien which partly explains why he is fluent in that language. I edited some background of the characters away to shorten the length.
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Originally Posted by
FlatTop
Feels good to be back alive. So much updates from ilock bro makes even better.
Sorry to those who failed to get my return up as i was fighting to stay alive.
Thank you
What happened to you ? Did you get Covid 19 ?
Hope you get well soon.
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Originally Posted by
husky1shepherd4
ILOCK u really a good writer
i just happen to notice that u did a good call back reference on your last update
Hibiki use to think pui pui Ron as santa claus
and Ron is now the santa claus of Jackson
hahah. yes. Ron is the santa claus in green
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Originally Posted by
Skyyexr
Fantastic masterpiece!
With all 3 great stories into 1 connected timeline is really a masterpiece!
I have enjoyed read all the 3 stories, so thank you for your work! I am waiting for a movie based on this
I am curious who you based on for Jane
She seems a perfect woman..
Jane is based on someone in real life so i will not be revealing her but i’m sure everyone has the ideal image of ’ Jane ’ in their own mind.
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Originally Posted by
bigK
Another amazing work!!!!
I would love if there is a version from Hibiki’s perspective!!
Would be nice to have but i don’t think i will be going down that road anytime soon.
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Originally Posted by
Seminude
Still got a feeling that Yiling is not dead.
Yiling is gone. Perhaps in another world where the dead can be raised like Jon Snow, she may return ?
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Originally Posted by
Rickweber
Such an amazing story, really drives the readers’ emotions. While fictitious, use of local landmarks allow us to create a vivid visualization of the events. Even to link the timing with Trump/ Kim’s meeting here is exceptional.
Thanks for sharing your writing creativity with us!
Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed the read.
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Originally Posted by
Snuber
Really nostalgic! Do we see Christina taking over Jackson after many twists n turns?
Any hints of Jackson’s next romantic interest? Candy or….?
Was the part on Teng’s death being shaved off? Abit surprised that it’s quite abrupt n no expansion on this part as he had been abusing Yvonne, on top of the cat n mouse game between him, Yiling n Jackson
There are no further plans to develop this further at the moment.
I wanted to give Jackson a love interest but it’s too soon after Yiling’s passing for him to move on so i left it as it is.
Yes i shaved off some bits for Teng’s death as i felt the whole piece is getting too long and heavy.
I separated the piece into 4 main section while editing.
Intro till nursing home is as it is, none was removed, the other 3 sections i edited pretty heavily to make it more light.
Intro - start till nursing home
Yvonne & Teng
Rajahs
Link back to TBW & BTILI
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Originally Posted by
madmen11
Thank you Bro Ilock. It has been a very entertaining read..
Take care and we look forward to your next piece, be it here or on your own site.
Thank you, you take care too. Stay safe.
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Originally Posted by
godsfury
Thanks for your super interesting story. I hv bought a few of your more in depth stories off your blog. Nv regret spending to support u.
I’ve noticed that this story differs alot from the rest.. lack of sex! Haha
Even without the erotica.. it still glues me to the screen reading your stories. Please keep up the good work!
Thank you for supporting my work ! haha. yes , there are no sex scenes in this piece although i did try to work on a draft between Xiaoyu & a character i removed totally in a interrogation scenario. Moving forward, i’m hoping to work on a mix of erotic and non-erotic work.
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Originally Posted by
thomascepai
i like the story very much. especially when jackson looks at the garden where yiling was standing when little jackson looks at her, the same place but opposite role.
the feeling was so nostalgic….in the mind of jackson, he wish yiling is by his side n to view the garden together….kinda sad this is not happening
That would have been a good ending with the 2 of them at the rooftop.
I explored this option but did not follow through during development
I know there are some questions about the butcher.
The butcher supposedly died in BTILI but he didn’t
His head was never found and the body did not belong to him.
He was Ron’s mole in Owen’s team all along.
He exited the fight with Jane right from the go and went dark because Owen would know he’s the one working for Ron when everything starts falling apart.
The fight was his ticket to get away from Owen.
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Originally Posted by
Tai_zi21
The kid must be hibiki and Jane daughter i Guess?
Another awesome story…
So will it be end of 2020 or start or 2021 before I see ur next masterpiece my fav writer?
Yes, that little girl is Lynette.
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Originally Posted by
amos184
Nice one ilock. Gut feelings says jackson n christina will click… but den again.. u always have something unexpected up ur sleeves.
Looking forward to COH. Hope its somewhere in 2021 CNY. Cheers n stay safe. 😷
Thank you. you too. Stay safe.
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Originally Posted by
water_boi
Please tell me that there will gonna be another epic piece on Chan, bro ilock…
Thank you again for the great intense writing
Change of heart is still in development.
Looking at early 2021 release
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Originally Posted by
husky1shepherd4
queen of rajah got no chance with jackson?
Haha. No plans for that to happen for now.
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Originally Posted by
mono
Kudos to the best story writer on SBF!!!
Keep us hooked on all your stories..
Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed my work
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Originally Posted by
Glenny86
Have been reading your stories for afew years. Great job ilock!
Thank you. Look forward to sharing more or my work in years to come.
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Originally Posted by
sennheiser
Hmm.. She was named after Lynn’s unborn daughter. Lynette right?
So the hot babe is Jane?
Yeap. That’s Lynette and Jane
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Originally Posted by
dogman
R the tattooed men with the dogs Ron’s Naga hunters?very little was written on them in the 3 stories….
Yes, those are Ron’s men from the Change of Heart series.
They will be covered in another piece early 2021
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Originally Posted by
lilkid
Thank you TS for all the great stories up till now. looking forward to more
Ilock definitely one of the best writers in sbf
Thank you thank you. There are many good writers in the forum. I hope to read more of theirs works and adventure too.
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Originally Posted by
lowhc
I had a good time reading, it is a good story and told very nicely. You have real talent and patience and passion. Much appreciated.
But this is a sex forum, the lack of sex is quite unsatisfying. Please put in the in future stories.
Thanks very much.
I’m trying to move away from pure erotic work, but if the flow works, i will include some erotic scenes in future full length work.
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Originally Posted by
badboy
Another masterpiece by bro ilock..clap clap..
Thank you for the time, effort and thoughts u put into writing n rewriting!
Must have been a challenge to do it during this CB period..must juggle WFH, family n yr fans here in SBF.
Can’t wait for the concluding endgame of this series!!
Cheers
Badboy
Thank you for reading my work ! It’s a difficult period for all.
I’m glad the CB period is coming to an end.
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Originally Posted by
chenzong
You are a fantastic writer. A seriously good one.
Thank you for the compliment.
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Originally Posted by
angelle
I’m proud to say I bought the other stories as well. You guys should check it out too haha.
But bro ILOCK can have everything on gumroad? I think so stories not there :/
Everything should be on gumroad.
. Free to read full length are not though. They will remain accessible on the blog