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Originally Posted by
fion.18
haven’t been here in ages, so glad you still writing this! I remember this story!
So glad that you still remember me and that this thread brings you some reading pleasure,
Sis fion.18
! Thank you for your support. Hope I can give everybody a good conclusion to this installment.
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Originally Posted by
vendomy8282
More twists and turns here, wife seems to be getting more exertive. Please continue writing.
Wife more assertive? You mean Wanda? Anyway, thanks so much for the support! Will try to write regularly
Bro vendomy8282
.
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Originally Posted by
Experience
Welcome to share. Great for a midnight story
Glad you like the postings,
Bro Experience
!
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Originally Posted by
farie
Great story bro. I’m sure this is not just mere fiction. It’s a little too detailed to be all made up. If it was all made up, u can publish your own series of books already. Pls complete the story, it’s real good.
Thanks for the compliments,
Bro farie
!
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Originally Posted by
SerflySGR
I would have expected some theatrics; you know the kind you watch in some
sandiwara
drama, whereby the concubine hangs on the husband and tells him not to bother about the dying wife but I had none of that from Wanda.
She sprinted off to pack the overnight bag; things that my wife would need when she was hospitalized. She made sure she packed my wife’s phone charger, a cardigan and a shawl just in case my wife would feel cold at night. She even pack a few sets of undergarments.
“Tak senang,”
she tried to explain to me as she blushed beet red .
I merely smiled at her. I was truly touched.
Throughout the journey, we behaved more like a married couple going off to visit a sick relative, rather than a man going to visit his wife with their domestic worker. I felt pangs of guilt but I continued driving; tears running down my cheeks.
“Jangan menangis,” Wanda consoled me as she wiped off my tears as I turned into the hospital car park.
By the time we got to the ward,
Adek
was already slumped on the sofa.
“Poor boy,”
my wife explained,
“long day for him. He had school in the morning then he went out with us.
Wanda passed the overnight bag to my wife.
My wife unzipped the bag and quickly ’took stock’ of its contents.
“Very good Wanda! I wouldn’t have packed better myself.”
she praised,
“I’m so proud of you; when you first came, you were so kalang kabut. Look at you now!”
she beamed.
Turning her gaze to
Adek
and I, she continued,
“now that I am stuck in this hospital bed, it’s up to you to take care of these two big babies at home.”
Wanda teared and nodded furiously.
I wonder if it was out of respect and obedience or out of guilt? Wasn’t it just moments ago when Wanda was on her knees sucking the very essence out of me. Before I knew it, I started sobbing too.
“Don’t be a cry baby,”
my wife consoled,
“Adek doesn’t know how serious it is; later he wake up and see you two crying, he will start crying too!”
“But it isn’t fair,”
I heard myself croak,
“just months ago, you did a check and they cleared you - a clean bill of health. How can this sickness ‘suddenly’ come and then ‘suddenly go and now, it’s got you……”
I was at a loss of words.
Perhaps Fred was right about me, I was indeed a ‘keyboard warrior’; behind the screen, I could type lines and lines of sentences but when I come face-to-face with people, I am always dumbstruck. That’s probably why I’m never at the front desk of the office, preferring to hide in the backrooms burying myself with back-end tasks.
We stayed a while longer and left just after visiting hours.
Adek
still had school the following day so as much as we would like to stay in the hospital ward longer, we had to go home.
As I pulled into the multi-storey car park, Wanda gave
Adek
a few gentle nudges.
“Oh? We are home?”
he yawned,
“they all went home already?”
It was not until we reached home that I realized that I had not seen Nadia or her cronies at the hospital.
Where did they go?
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Originally Posted by
changeluc
camping here
Thanks for camping here,
Bro changeluc
!
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Originally Posted by
otamay
Awesome writing.
Camping here for more juicy updates please.
That’s because I have awesome readers like you,
Bro otamay
!
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Originally Posted by
M45Singapore
Somehow, knowing Wanda has Black Magic skills, I would not put it past her to put TS wife in this situation
Good deduction,
Bro M45Singapore
! I will not rule out this possibility also.
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Originally Posted by
alec
It jus spices up the story after a year… Niceee
Thanks
Bro alec
! I try not to become like those Taiwan drama, keep repeating the same things. And sometimes the line between fact and fiction becomes so blur
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Originally Posted by
RapidxBoy
Nice nice, many updates to come!
I try
Bro RapidxBoy
. Usually weekends a bit tough because need to spend with family.
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Originally Posted by
myluckyguy
wow its been a while, i had almost forgotten the storyline but I am enjoying the continuation
Yes
Bro myluckyguy
! My company IT put a lot of restrictions that I cannot access on phone or PC. Only recently then managed to get a stable connection. Sorry.
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Originally Posted by
diputs1269
So with Wanda around become spice girl, cheers!
Bro diputs1269
, spice originated from Indonesia, if I am not mistaken?
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Originally Posted by
antartica
Damn Bro @SerflySGR!!
Made me read for hours over 2 days… LOL
Fucking good story!
hehehe, cannot wait for the next episode…
Thank you for your support
Bro antartica
!
Your words are very encouraging cos that was exactly what I did last time!
I used to read stories by great brothers like OldChangKe, TigerWoody74, etc. Because of them, I decided to post.
Thank you bro for your kind words!
You just made Wanda wet.
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Originally Posted by
otamay
Agreed wholeheartedly.
Camping here for more juicy updates please.
Thank you for your support always,
Bro otamay
!
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Originally Posted by
neotix
Bro, don’t forget about Wanda!
Thanks for the reminder,
Bro neotix
!
I try cos a bit busy with
helping my neighbor
. Will get back to Wanda soon. Heh heh!
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Originally Posted by
otamay
Good deed here.
Just curious, your neighbour is a he or she? Hehe.
Alamak!
Bro otamay
, why you so like dat? You don’t which
neighbor
I am talking about
meh
?
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Originally Posted by
hengbee
My guess is a she hahaa
No need to guess,
Bro hengbee
… You are also reading
that ’neighbor’ thread
. Heh heh!
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Originally Posted by
sunnyevanshine
Camping for updates pls hahah
By all means,
Bro sunnyevanshine
. Hope I can do a ‘good’ update!
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Originally Posted by
otamay
So you are the good DADDY helping Maggi, hehe.
Caring is sharing,
Bro otamay
!