Thanks all for the support.
I hoped you like the story.
Perhaps there will be part 2 but currently, the story has to end here.
until next time.
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sexcision
Btw, I bet my last drop of sperm that the lady at the door is candice.
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Originally Posted by
Clazziquai
I’m guessing that it’s Candice at the end
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big fatty
V likely is Candice.. 😊
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dgsk
My thoughts exactly!
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jay8888
It’s Min Na
Up to you guys to guess
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Originally Posted by
redarrow
Great work TS, it’s going better with revenge sex with Kim?
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Originally Posted by
sexcision
Wow, the ending was indeed not expected and rather sad.
Superb writing TS! Looking forward to your next piece! Soon I hope.
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Originally Posted by
dgsk
Bro Pussluver
Bravo! *clap* *clap* *clap*
What a rollercoaster ride of emotions. Your description of Kim and his actions made me cringe. It felt so disgustingly real.
Looking forward to your next masterpiece.
Cheers!
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ris2099
While everyone was discussing how chris would get back at kim, i know it will come. what i was anticipating was the twist, as all bro pussluver’s stories have.
well, i still never saw it coming. it hit me like a truck or car (no pun intended).
just shows how good bro Pussluver’s writing skills is. it would be nice if his stories will be adapted to a movie or a least a tv drama. too bad it will never happen. but one can dream though.
once again, great job bro Pussluver. i will be waiting for your next story. take your time and hope you find another interesting inspiration, you perverted bastard!
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Originally Posted by
water_boi
What a ending! Never expected that. Thank you for another masterpiece again bro pussluver. More to come pls.
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KLKOOL
Great Story Bro
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Originally Posted by
Jaguar00
Great build up but lousy ending.
One does not simply kill off a main character to end the story.
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Originally Posted by
GrieGzEters
Never expect the ending to be like this but I Guess Denise died out of guilt after she as surrender herself despite assuring her husband she will never let anyone screw her after The incident with Neo.
Thanks All for your support. Appreciate you waiting for the story over the past 2 weeks plus.
Sorry bro Jaguar to disappoint you. Will take note of your feedback for future stories.
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Sigg4
Oh my god, what a ending. Although it is sad, but it is actually a relieve to Denise also as she cannot work anymore and who Knows if the boss will threaten her again for same thing all over again when she has to be humiliated again and again. But I seriously felt like reading a part 2, there are alot of things have not ended yet Kim oy got sacked is not enough. Jack they all also have not gotten their retribution.
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Originally Posted by
OreoKefen
Bravo @pussluver. Great writing. I really appreciate your time and effort to complete the story. I didn’t expect such sad ending but I guess only fairy tales have happy ending…
Still wondering who is the “she”? Candice? … Angel? … Alissa? …
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slyhypo
What a ride!
Thanks Bro for an incredible story, great flow, pacing, suspense, and a nice helping amount of eroticism.
Looking forward to the next adventure
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Originally Posted by
Xia406
Quite a story writer you are bro.
I hope it is entirely fiction though.
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Originally Posted by
Selecao
What an awesome story, thanks TS. Looking forward to next part!!
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Originally Posted by
unsanea
Very good story, thank you bro pussluver
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hiall1
Ya I also do hope it is fiction. Especially the last part.. :/
Thats really a tragic ending.
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Originally Posted by
Campione1980
Bravo writing TS,
Here to show my little support, also curious to find out who it really was at the door. My guess is Jieying is the one since nobody guessed it was her.
Sincerely hope u will find time to write up part 2 (if any)
Cheers
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charliee
Thank TS for the effort and the contribution of this incredible story. Can we have part II please?
Thanks all for your support.
There may or may not have a part 2. Writing a story eats up a lot of my brain juice and currently, there isn’t any left
Yes. It is fiction as stated in the very beginning
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Originally Posted by
badboy
Totally unexpected ending!
Why did e now awoken Denise hv to die after being coerced to acknowledge her inner slut self?
Have to say it was not time ending I expected..but there’s part II to tie up the loose ends.
All those that crossed Chris would have to pay the price..
Thank you bro Pussluver for your stories..respects..
Badboy
bro, u have been reading my stories each time and I see you in my threads. Much appreciated.
As previously, all my stories have a happy ending or fairy tale ending.
I felt like having some impact this time and it seemed to have created that. I know it is not to everyone liking but well, I can’t please everyone. (apologies for those that wanted a happy ending.)
I had some previous comments in previous stories via PM that my stories were too pleasant and so this is this. Opps.
Anyway, thanks for your feedback
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Originally Posted by
sexcision
Wow, the ending was indeed not expected and rather sad.
Superb writing TS! Looking forward to your next piece! Soon I hope.
thanks to u bro, for bringing up the thread each day so that I did not have to scroll multi pages to find it.
Until next time.
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back to work
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Originally Posted by
coolmanspooky
I read all your stories :-) Actually this story is a good one…it also taught Chris a lesson with the demise of Denise…it taught him not to be greedy and accept the offer from Kim…in life, you win some, you lose some…some things like kinship will never be the same again if one goes onto the wrong path…
true bro. In life, sometimes there are things that we need to accept and not be too greedy.
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rooneyrocks
Great story. And not the usual happy ending. Thanks.
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lobangkingz
really like this story, support your thread ts.
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Originally Posted by
jebi
Really nice lovely story here.
Shall give strong support.
Hope to read more.
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Originally Posted by
want0nmee
thanks for the story TS. shall wait for your new piece of art
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Originally Posted by
Arthurh
Thanks TS for the great story. Cheers!
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Originally Posted by
kilobarjade
Very nice story TS, thanks!
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Originally Posted by
KoreanStuff
No words to describe!!
Thanks bro pussluver
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Originally Posted by
CharlieZheron
Wishing for part 2 too!
Thanks to all bros for reading. I really thank you for your feedback and will inspire me to write more interesting stories.
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Originally Posted by
badboy
Unexpected in a good way bro!
it was a departure from your usual fairytale ending..pleasant surprise to me I feel
Can’t wait for your next story
Cheers
Badboy
Glad u like it.
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There are some bros that asked me to complete bro hardaway story. Unfortunately, I will not be doing it.
Whatever he had planned for, it will only be interesting for him to complete and decide on how the story will end.
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There is another bro who asked me to complete bro pyrokinets story, unfortunately his style is not in my genre.
Not the kind of story that I like or is able to produce his flavour and mine will not be as good as how he intend it to be.
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I am working on another suggestion by another bro. Hopefully I can have some ideas soon.
Hi Bros and Sis,
This story had ended. If there is a part 2, maybe in future (just maybe) it will be in a separate thread.
I am working on another story (currently stuck in the second page coz no inspiration) but even so, again it will be in a separate thread.
Just informing so that you do not need to click refresh each time, waiting for a continuation of this story.