The Tragedy of Qing Qing

Qing Qing waited for Simon till 12 plus am that night….. but he is still not back yet. The next morning she woke up and realised that Simon did not return home to sleep as his side of the bed is still quite tidy. She walked out of the room and search for Simon, end up she found Simon (Naked) in the other room with a buxom PRC lady about 40 years old, they were asleep in each other arms. One look at her she can tell that she works as a masseuse. She felt angry and woke both of them up. Simon just smirked at Qing Qing, paid the buxom lady and the lady dressed up and left, feeling disgusted at Simon’s odour on her. Simon then told Qing Qing that he cannot be blamed as Qing Qing cheated on him in the 1st place; but he has forgotten the fact that even before Qing Qing got to know Victor, he already started bringing random girls home for sex. Tears formed in Qing Qing eyes. Simon then pushed Qing Qing onto the bed and anal-ed her again, dripping sweat on her back after some thrusting. He cummed in lying doggy position after 40 mins all over her sweaty back. After that he slapped Qing Qing as he didn’t allowed her to bathe the previous day but she did, she bathed after Simon went out for massage. That was for disobeying him. Simon then ordered Qing Qing to send him a photo of Victor (for his plan). Qing Qing had no choice but to use Victor’s wechat photo and send to Simon. After Simon has Victor’s photo, he then anal-ed Qing Qing again, this time cummed on her sweaty body in missionary position. Simon then went out, without telling Qing Qing where he is going. He then meet up with a private investigator PI and showed him Victor’s photo. He pay the PI to monitor Victor’s actions and whereabouts 24 hours. Simon wanted to know Victor’s life habits (pattern) and whether he still meet up with Qing Qing. Meanwhile, Qing Qing was devastated that Victor has yet to reply her wechat after informing him she was pregnant. The fact is that Victor is vexed and frustrated, he doesn’t know what is the next step and how to proceed with Qing Qing already. He can’t even concentrate his work, his performance dropped and was told off by his boss.

Victor’s boss suggest for him to go on a no pay leave until he has settled his personal issue. Victor has no choice but to accept. He then left the office. He does not know that he was being watched by a mysterious guy. The guy being hired by Simon (Private Investigator). For the next few days, the PI continued to watch and observe Victor. Nothing unusual as Victor didn’t even text or meet Qing Qing. Both of them missed each other dearly but none initiated the conversation. Both are in love but they can’t be together. To spite Qing Qing, Simon has been bringing KTV girls, masseuses home to spend the night everyday. Furthermore, part of the reason being he can’t use Qing Qing’s vagina.

Victor cannot take it anymore. One fine day (a weekday), he drove down to Simon’s bungalow while Simon is at work. He rang the doorbell, and Qing Qing was so delighted to see Victor ad they hugged and kissed passionately outside the gate. The PI was nearby and quickly took a picture of them. Qing Qing then invited Victor into the house. After a few hours, Qing Qing got into Victor’s car and they both went to the shopping mall for ‘dating’. Of course, their actions are being monitored by the PI and he took alot of pictures of them in the shopping mall. All these findings to be submitted to his customer Simon.

Am ending this story soon…..

The PI then sent those photos to Simon. Simon was enraged when he sees those evidences of Qing Qing still being with Victor. That make him more determined to execute his revenge.

What happened between Victor and Qing Qing is that when Victor was in Simon’s house previously. Victor told Qing Qing that he has thought over this issue for the past few days. He really love Qing Qing, he cannot leave without her, so he persuaded Qing Qing to leave Simon again and he will take care and raise the child together. Qing Qing agreed because of how Simon treated her the past few days. The child is his and yet he accused her that the child is a illegitimate. Plus, Simon brought home all sorts of ladies to spend the night with, without considering about her feelings. Qing Qing and Victor spent the next few days shopping (they cannot go hotel anymore since she is pregnant), their actions are all filmed by the PI. Since Qing Qing decided to divorce Simon, she agreed to move out of the house and stay with Victor and his parents.

Qing Qing is back in the house, packing her stuffs with Victor’s help. She decided to pack and leave quietly without informing Simon. The PI is closely monitoring the situation. Suddenly, Simon’s car sped past, he quickly parked his car in the driveway and rushed into the house. So coincidence that Qing Qing is done with packing and is about to leave with Victor. Simon’s friend followed closely with a van.

A confrontation started, followed by a scuffle. Qing Qing and Victor were both knocked out by Simon and his friend. They were both dragged into the van. As for the PI, his job is done. Simon informed him that this case is now closed. He has had enough evidence. The van is then on the way, to Simon’s oil and gas plant, where Simon will execute his plan there. Qing Qing and Victor are being kidnapped.

Qing Qing woke up, it was already nightfall. She looked around her surroundings, she was shocked to find herself naked and lying on a mattress, mouth gagged. She sat up and saw Victor, also naked, with his mouth gagged, tied up and hanging in the air. Below him is a huge water tank. They were in Simon’s oil and gas factory.

You are awake! Simon’s voice boomed. Qing Qing eyes wide with fear. Simon then removed Qing Qing’s gag and told her his plan for both of them. He expressed much hatred towards the both of them for adultery. His friend then appeared beside him. Simon’s plan was to have sex with Qing Qing (anal) in full view in front of Victor and let him watch. He also intended to share Qing Qing with his friend. Simon then went on to coat Qing Qing’s naked body with saliva (what he always do). He then went on to suck on her breasts and nipples. Once he felt his rod gotten hard, he inserted into Qing Qing’s asshole and started thrusting and pumping missionary. He then switched to spoon and doggy on the mattress, while Victor was forced to watch. Sweat began to drip all over Qing Qing, furthermore it was hot in the factory. After about 30 mins, he cummed all over Qing Qing’s sweaty body in missionary. Next, his friend began to lick Qing Qing all over, followed by feasting on her breasts and nipples. His friend then follow suit and insert his rod into Qing Qing’s asshole. His friend also cummed all over Qing Qing in about 30 mins. Both of them took turns to mount and fuck Qing Qing, while Victor was too grossed out to watch. Simon smirked when he saw Victor’s rod got hard, but he sneered at him: " Too bad, no chance for you to fuck her, since you have been fucking her all these time without my knowledge". It was about 6am the next morning when Qing Qing is now in a mess, covered with sweat, saliva and both Simon and his friend’s semen. They decided that it was enough. It was a one last fuck with Qing Qing as Simon planned to murder the both of them. Qing Qing naked, wrecked body was then tied up and hang in the air beside Victor. Below her is also a water tank full of water.

“One last chance to say goodbye to each other”! Simon boomed. Qing Qing and Victor look at each other. Both of them were then released and dropped into the water tank. The water tank is too deep and they were drowned to death.

Qing Qing and Victor’s dead body were not found as the water is just too deep and nobody would even enter the water tank factory. Furthermore the sign at the door read “Authorized personnel only”. Only engineers and managers are allowed into the tank for maintenance purpose.

Simon and his friend then fled to Indonesia in case the Singapore police find the dead bodies and track them down…… They stay in a hut among the villagers.

Not end yet…. Intend to end in the next part.

Back from a massage session with one of my regular ML. Thought I would share my thoughts here in my own thread…… Rather than commenting on other thread.

Main gist of it is about KC. Again, think twice…..

Appointment this afternoon, but while my ML was waiting for me, a Caucasian guy walked in, without appointment and I was on the way to the shop. My ML then text me to shift my appointment back by 30 mins as she has to serve the Caucasian guy 1st. Okay, I understand and am cool about it since she can serve 1 more customer instead of waiting for me. Why not? i respect that.

Anyway after I reached the shop and signed in, the massage room door was not closed and I saw my ML talking to the Caucasian guy, session was over and before the Caucasian left, he gave her a kiss(Smooching sound) on the cheek and left (Western Culture). Okay, I felt disgusted at this point and closed the door of the massage room.

So, she came in and said she felt hot…. and halfway through the massage, before going into the main course….. I helped ML to massage her back abit and noticed her back was abit sticky (a sign that she just sweat). She even asked me “I sweated right?” But deep in my heart I know before this what had went on with the Caucasian guy lah. I just didn’t ask her.Anyway when caucasians they tend to last longer, sweaty sex will result lo…… I wasn’t feeling good at all.

In conclusion, bros being KC-ed or almost being KC-ed like me…. Can you accept the fact that you witnessed a Caucasian guy kissed your ML? and F your ML before you? (no offence about this thou, just ranting). Not only Caucasians thou, the same treatment goes towards other bros. And when you are not visiting her, the same old stories go again, what is she doing at the moment? Is she with other bros now? what are they doing? etc…..

So… That is how Simon killed both Qing Qing and Victor. Hence the story name “The tragedy of Qing Qing”. How Qing Qing came to Singapore hoping to marry a good husband and a better life for both she and her family. Ended up being murdered, even when she was alive, Simon did not treat her any better either.

It has been few days since Simon and his friend hid in the hut in the village in Indonesia. It was on a fateful night, close to midnight when Simon went to bathe; with his friend in the living room watching TV program. Halfway through bathing, Simon suddenly saw Qing Qing and Victor’s apparition appeared in front of him. He was lying in the bathtub enjoying his bath. The image of Qing Qing was holding Victor’s hands and they were floating in mid air above Simon. They were glaring angrily at him. Simon rubbed his eyes and told himself to remain calm, just his imagination.

After a few seconds, the apparition is still there. Simon apologised to both of them in fear, he was shouting “Sorry I didn’t meant to kill the both of you”. His friend heard it and rushed to the bathroom, but the door was locked since Simon is bathing. His friend shouted: “Are you ok bro”? Simon did not reply. At this time, Simon was already fearful and he pee-ed into the bathtub. Suddenly, an invisible force pushed him into the urine-filled bathtub, he is not able to get up from the bathtub. He felt really uncomfortable and he is beginning to be unable to breathe. After few minutes, he is no longer breathing and the bathroom was quiet once more. Qing Qing and Victor’s apparition disappeared. Simon’s friend can only hear the sound of bubbles from the bathtub. He then forced the door opened but it was too late, Simon was dead, submerged in the bathtub full of water. His friend then rushed out of the house to inform the neighbours (Fellow villagers).

The head of the village(Chief) has alot of knowledge about the super natural. One look at Simon in the bathtub, he could tell that Simon was ‘Killed" by super natural force. He classified it as an unnatural death. His friend was very fearful up till this point when asked by the village chief whether did they offend any spirits, as he remembered they killed Qing Qing and Victor few days ago ; which is the reason they are here in Indonesia. He shook his head, refused to admit. The chief does not believe but he got no choice. He can only help to exorcise Simon’s body to prevent any hauntings. After that, Simon’s dead body was handed over to the Indonesia police and transported back to Singapore for a proper cremation.

~End of story~

Would like to listen to any comments regarding the ending. Does this story ends well? Does it have a twist? Will continue writing if I have any inspiration. Thanks those who supported my 2 stories from beginning till now. Really appreciate it; although the response is not as good as other stories.

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Honest comments with no intention of offense.

1. Story line not detailed enough (can elaborate more? Perhaps can feel free to send me a pm as well

2. Don’t expose your own story at the start by saying it is fiction (noted)

3. Write what you want, don’t need to ask for opinion otherwise it’s predictable (noted)

4. Story plot too short ( noted, will see if I can write a longer one next time)

5. Ending part too drama become ghost story (I was once like that)( haha Actually wanted to end at the part that Qing Qing and Victor died but guessed I intend to add abit of supernatural stuffs to make the story abit more unique uh… oops

6. Too little characters in story line (agree)

7. Check more on paragraphs before presenting your story (means shorten my paragraphs)

8. Don’t write a bit than stop, rather you collate all your details and present (noted)

9. Always keep your readers in suspense (noted)

10. Don’t rush to write and write to rush like army style (this shld be linked to point number 9 I guessed. I admit I was kinda rushed sometimes when writing as I worry I might forget some details afterwards. Do u have this issue as well? When u suddenly thought of a plot and details, afterwards forgotten

I hope my humble opinions will help you in writing a better story in future. Nevertheless, keep up the passion. We need more writers here!

Up you for your effort.

Cheers

I have replied accordingly to your suggestions. Thank u bro for your suggestions, which some points I have taken note of. Upped you back my humble 2 points