It Pays to Keep Your Mouth Shut


    Chapter #11

    bro Pokimon1, my guess is that most of us do not like to stroll through 1-2 pages of “well done or keep it up” post…….

    The number of hits & rating itself already is good feedback, dun u think so?

    Cheers,

    BC

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    Chapter #12

    Quote:

    Originally Posted by

    Pokimon1

    I need your feedback. Although this story is 90% true, let me know what you like or dislike. Can I make it more “juicy” for you?

    Well, jus too song to make any comment, dumb folded liao…good one bro, if have pictures with cunt-JUICEs, it will definitely look MORE juicy…..continue bro…

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    Chapter #13

    Quote:

    Originally Posted by

    Pokimon1

    Someone also gave it a 5-star rating.

    I need your feedback. Although this story is 90% true, let me know what you like or dislike. Can I make it more “juicy” for you?

    Without your feedback, it is hard for me to continue.

    Your writing definitely deserves a 5-star rating!

    I suggest to keep the story as true as possible without the additional “juice”.

    IMO, true stories make the best ones.

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    Chapter #14

    Bro, excellent and very descriptive writing. The narration of your true life experiences must have brought back wonderful memories. Do carry on bro, enjoyed it and hope to enjoy more of it, cheers.

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    Chapter #15

    personnally prefer the real story without the extras.. the more real, the better!! no power to upz u, but definately a good campin ground..

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    Chapter #16

    Quote:

    Originally Posted by

    eeemen

    Bro, excellent and very descriptive writing. The narration of your true life experiences must have brought back wonderful memories. Do carry on bro, enjoyed it and hope to enjoy more of it, cheers.

    Thank you brother for your kind complements.

    Yes, writing about these past experiences gives me a thrill and a hard-on

    I’ve been busy lately. Will continue to write when I have the time.

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    Chapter #17

    Bro Pokimon1,

    Really enjoy reading ur expirenced, keep cumming…….

    BTW, you love pokimon? my favourite cartoon.

    Vin

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    Chapter #18

    Quote:

    Originally Posted by

    vin2324

    Bro Pokimon1,

    Really enjoy reading ur expirenced, keep cumming…….

    BTW, you love pokimon? my favourite cartoon.

    Vin

    Pokimon is a name given to me by my fuck buddy.

    She calls me Poki Mon because I am a

    POKI

    NG

    MON

    STER

    I Love to poke!!!!

    Kekeke

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    Chapter #19

    bro pokimon,not the bros here remain silent,all busy reading ur stories and pcc,maybe thats just me!

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    Chapter #20

    Quote:

    Originally Posted by

    Pokimon1

    Pokimon is a name given to me by my fuck buddy.

    She calls me Poki Mon because I am a

    POKI

    NG

    MON

    STER

    I Love to poke!!!!

    Kekeke

    so what about that “1” behind the pokimon?

    number 1 poking monster in the world.

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