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Originally Posted by
Mafan
thx bro for another wonderful story with fast update hope to see another work soon
Hallo bro. I know you read all my stories. Thanks for the support
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Originally Posted by
KingHenry14
Thanks for a wonderful story TS.
Love the part where Mel tease those guys at the golf club
well, she did not actually teased. but glad you like that.
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Originally Posted by
Brogary
It’s just not the same feeling anymore. Before that, every night waiting for ur update. Now it’s ended, there’s a sense of emptiness hahaha. But good story bro. Keep up the good work and continue ur new stories if u have any upcoming inspirations
Thanks bro. Currently no inspiration. I have been trying to look for one, but cant find any. Guess you may have to wait.
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Obeliskseamus
The story spirals to an end too soon indeed. But nice piece of work it still is.
Conceptualize and complete one long story never is easy. Writer has earned his credit.
Till the re-charge of fresh ideas it is, patiently we will await a new beginning.
THANK YOU!
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icymage84
It’s not only about the ending, it is more like a 10 part story line, which like from part 5 jump to part 10. Felt too sudden with the ending coming and no more of the story to read
And as always, appreciate the efforts writers like you and ilock who provide stories for everyone
well, I get what the both of you mean. You were hoping for a meatier body. However, as you noticed, most of my stories comes in about 25 - 30 pages, including comments.
Perhaps I may consider a longer one next time. But I do not have too much flair for long stories. As in my mind, I would become stale and may just start to indulge in the story of Mel meeting up with Dex over and over again. Of course, there could be add on of what Mike could have done or Ricky could have done. Or perhaps introduce new characters.
I guessed this is the part that is missing.
I am trying to pen a new story, but no luck. Hope you guys don’t have to wait too long.
in the meantime, please read bro ilock’s one. I am reading that as well. It’s a nice story.
writing in progress. Hangon for a bit.
I need to have an ending before I start posting. At this point in time, there is no ending and I don’t wish to left readers hanging again.