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Originally Posted by
leo_guy
Do u still rem where u read?
If can find, do post the link here thanks
Please find and paste the link!!! Great lord this is that kind of respect that you guys offer for someone that writes for you reading pleasure
For the brother or sisters (if any) that have supported me I deeply regret that I am in consideration of stopping my fingers as I have felt utter disappointment I writing this story especially when the time devoted is not being appreciated.
Apologises.
Starter.
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Originally Posted by
ravendanish
I don’t have the points to up you but u have my support….don’t stop….
Dear Brothers, These points mean nothing to me, What can they be used for anyway I do not know. I am just greatly affected by these ppl whom are not appreciating the hours I spent on this and why can’t they do things they want on PM?
I hereby openly challenge Taisho75 in providing the thread and Leo_guy to explain his intention of not using a PM and openly request for a link to be placed on my thread.
For A Writer’s work to be deemed as plagiarism, is by far the most insulting remark I believe any writer can receive.
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Originally Posted by
Lennyberg
I totally understand how you feel! please do not be discourage by these spoilers. points honestly means nothing, it cant be changed to vouchers or cash equivalents anyways. for me these points are for encouragement!
Please continue the story! DO NOT STOP! as i have mentioned earlier, it really reminds me of those days…
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Originally Posted by
yellowbro
Bro, u got a great story here n I truly enjoyed it as ur story allow me to relive my sec sch days in my mind! Don’t be disheartened pls!
ok, end of these nonsense, I start to see ppl from my era. whom I believe can relate more to it, Ok Guys I shall Write on and Sorry for the nonsensical behaviour.
For those that have never attempted to skip school and wish to remain at your home, it was a chore. I woke up the next day knowing that I was supposed meeting Jasmine and Ann at my home, but as my parent normally left for work later than me. I had to change into my School uniform and “go to School” at the usual timing. after leaving the house I went to the opposite blk and camped wait for my parents to be out of the house before returning. Of Course it was safer to wait for another 15mins after they left so you can be sure they did not return as they may have forgotten something. And that was what I did that day.
I return to my home at around 8am, and shortly after someone knocked on my door it was Jasmine and Ann. I opened my door and let them in, and it was surprising for me that they bought Macdonalds breakfast (during my time Macdonalds Breakfast meant your pocket money for that day or two) for me.
Jasmine: Nah, Eat first ( Jasmine passing me the breakfast)
I placed the paperbag on the table.
Me: Why you change so fast?
Jasmine: Change?
Me: Yah lor, yesterday I heard someone leave voicemail ah, She cry wor.
Ann was laughing softly behind Jasmine.
Jasmine: I don’t think so, I don’t remember.
Me: Heng, (Lucky) I haven’t delete my message. you want to hear?
Jasmine blushed as Ann held her on the shoulder.
I took the cordless phone and pulled Ann to me
Me: Eh Ann come, I let you hear.
Ann nodded and smiled as Jasmine tried to take the cordless phone from me, She rubbed on my ribs and there was some pain.
Me Ouch…. (holding my ribs)
Jasmine: Pain ah, told you to have your breakfast. Talk so much.
Ann took the paperbag and arrange the breakfast nicely on the table.
Ann: Lawrence, come and eat.
I went on and enjoyed the breakfast that the girl brought me as the were munching on muffins they bought for themselves.
Ann was very attentive and will pass me tissues when I have things on my mouth while Jasmine will always be criticising that I ate like a pig.
Me: yah lah, Jasmine you high class hor.
Jasmine: it’s not that, it’s just who would eat and drop food like that.
Me: Someone you cry for lor
Jasmine: I sent the wrong message.
Me: oh you know another Lawrence lah.
Jasmine: why not?
Me: also true but I remember you should give me a voicemail on something yesterday hor.
Jasmine: We talk later, Let’s finish breakfast.
We finish breakfast as I was observing the girls, seriously who can make out that they were Sisters, Ann clear up after breakfast and when I offered the help she told me that is was ok, but on the other hand Jasmine just left it Ann to do the clearing and started walking around my home look at that random things.
We sat on the sofa after Ann had finished clearing the table.
Jasmine: You seem fine.
Me: I told you that I was fine.
Jasmine: Sonia told us it was horrific, it was to the point that you were at least crippled or something.
Ann: Yup, Jasmine thought you were going to die.
Me: Oh that is why she cried.
Jasmine: Are we seriously going there again.
Me: no but I tell you I will keep this voicemail as long as I live. (did not happen as pager accounts were later all suspended)
Jasmine gave me the whatever look and I was enjoying every moment of playing her down.
The girls asked to see my wounds and I felt like a exhibit, yesterday was Felicia, Then Christina and now the sisters.
I took off my top, Ann did not touch my bruises and was asking me if it was painful, Jasmine did not asked anything and just commented that it does not look painful.
Me: What not painful? you try lor let ppl whack.
Jasmine punched me light on the arm.
Jasmine: Be a Man for god’s sake.
Me: Eh, enough seeing. So the voicemail how? I already extend till today for you hor.
Jasmine: You ask Ann, you always rebut me
Ann: We let you decide..
Me: Ok lor,
I held Ann’s her and pulled her walking to my room.
Jasmine: where you two going.
I decide mah, since Ann tell me then I decide her lor.
Jasmine followed us and I closed my door before she could come in.
Me: Sorry my GF today is Ann….
Jasmine: I am not interested in joining the two of you.
Me: Ok lor then you go sit at the sofa.
I closed the door fully and I asked Ann to be seated on the bed.
I whispered to her that I was going to disturb Jasmine farther and smile and asked me on what did I plan to do.
Me: oh………. oh….. not there Ann…..!!!
Ann was giving me a puzzled look as I placed my finger on my lips asking her to remain quiet
Me: oh…. yes there Ann…
I quietly moved to the door and opened it in a swift motion.
Jasmine was standing there and I looked at her with a smile on my face.
Me: enjoying what you were hearing? I thought you are not interested.
Jasmine: I was just bored outside.
Me: like that, you know you can come in if you asked nicely.
Jasmine mumbles: Can I go in too, I am bored.
Me: Huh?
She barges in and it did hurt me a little.
there was no sex that morning but lots of teasing and disturbing of both Ann and Jasmine in the room. nothing more than harmless tickles but for me it became painful at times.
But at ard 1020am all things changed when I received a voicemail.
Sonia Voicemail: Virgin, Christina tell me she coming to find Cindy.
I knew I need to be there, I could not leave Christina alone. I told the Jasmine and Ann about the voicemail, asking them to go back.
Jasmine: then what you want to go down?
Me: Then let Christina Face them on her own?
Jasmine: Please.. you don’t always need to be the hero.
Me: You don’t know one lah, It’s not about being a hero.
Jasmine: We are not letting you go, you have injuries.
Ann too gave me a worrying look but I knew she would agree if I insisted.
I asked Ann to leave me and Jasmine alone for a while as I think we need to talk over this, She left the room closing the door after she went out.
I knew I needed to overpower Jasmine and I walked towards her as I spoke
Me: Jasmine, Please I cannot let Christina go alone.
Jasmine: No, even Christina won’t approve of this.
Jasmine backed to the edge of my room and I placed her shoulder.
Me: I remember Ann saying I am the one to decide.
Jasmine: That’s what Ann said, not me.
Me: Jasmine, Can I decide?
Jasmine: ok you can go, But we go with you.
I smiled at Jasmine.
Me: thank you.
In the end , the two girls followed me to Sonia’s School at Yio Chu Kang. Christina was there and in my mind I was think what is she doing coming alone. (for that moment I will say that Christina was more gutsy than me)
Christina was standing in front of the school gate as we approach, She seem calm and ready for anything that comes in her way. I asked the girls to wait in the side as I move towards her.
Me: Eh why you come alone?
Christina: Why you here? and I am not alone Felicia is with me.
I was in such a fluster that I forgot to contact Felicia.
Me: Sonia told me and I cannot just let you do this alone, Jasmine and Ann also here, But where is Felicia?
Christina: She went to find Sonia, Later you don’t say anything just stand one side.
Me: Why?
Christina: This is Zhar bor dai chi (girl’s Issue)
As it was the end of normal school hour students pour out of the school, from far I see Felicia and Sonia running towards us.
Felicia: Idiot, you also come ah.
Me: Yah, Sonia paged me, Jasmine and Ann are over there.
Felicia: why you bring them, aiyah nevermind lah you take Sonia and stay with them.
Me: Orh.
Soon Cindy and Penny emerge from the school with a couple of girls, Cindy exchanged stares with Christina and that stare did not break through out.
Cindy walks up and smirks as she see Felicia.
Cindy: Why yesterday one got whack still not enough ah?
Piak, Christina slaps Cindy across the face.
Christina: you are Orh Pah’s(Black Panther’s) God sister? I am Christina!! I came to tell you don’t touch my sister.
Cindy: Sister? who is your sister?
Christina: Sonia lah.
Cindy: Sonia join my gang willingly , you can ask her. Christina you know the rules, you think I school ECA ah, she like she join me, she don’t like she walk off.
Cindy slaps Christina, and I was clenching my fist.
more students were gathering around us and Christina suggested that they talk at another place. Cindy ask told Christina to follow her, we followed behind closely. I felt Sonia holding onto my arm tightly and I figure she was afraid.
We reached a block and Cindy told us to go to the highest level warning Christina not to run, Christina told her not to worry she will be there.
we took a Lift to the highest level where Christina continued her “negotiation” With Cindy.
Christina: So how then you will let Sonia off.
Cindy: you want Sonia, I can give her back no problem, but if she get into trouble in school that one I don’t know.
Christina: Cindy, Mai ka Xia Lan! (dun be too cocky)
Cindy: Lim bu tio si xia lan, lu ber ah ne kwan! (I am Cocky, what can you do)
Sonia starts crying and telling me to ask Christina to forget it.
Cindy: don’t say I don’t give you chance, I Jio you 1 on 1. winner have the say swee bo? (steady?)
Before Christina replied Cindy has already swung punches at her, This was the first time I saw a Cat Fight, Seriously don’t imagine Maggie Q style of fighting, it was messy hair pull scratch and of course my personal favourite ripping of shirts.
we watched on as Christina fought Cindy, Christina they were in a tussle, and both of them had their uniform buttons ripped off, as much as I was concerned over Christina, I was enjoying the view, I never notice Cindy got nice assets.
Back to the fight Christina won and managed to pin Cindy on the ground, She made her promise not to bother Sonia again. But when she released Cindy, Penny and the girls following Cindy ran forward and attacked Christina. Sonia was the first to run forward hugging Christina, while Jasmine and Ann went forward to pull the girls away. Felicia was kicking Cindy who was wore out. All I could do was stand and watch as it was Zhar bor Dai Chi.
I pressed for the lift as the girls held Christina, Felicia passed Christina a Windbreaker which she wore to cover her torn Shirt. We took the lift down and reached the void deck
Christina hugged Sonia telling her it’s ok, They were going to Christina’s home to help her treat her wounds. Christina told me to send Jasmine and Ann back, which I obliged. We parted our ways and I went off to the station with Jasmine and Ann.
Dear Reader,
Just place the past behind, as I have given much thought and I agreed with some bros here that there will be haters not matter what. I have been a Silent reader for a long time but however I too have read stories that stopped midway, I now understand why some writers stop writing and the main reason I started writing was that I too have nothing more to read here.
no matter what I will keep writing, I might not be as good as others but I hope you guys enjoy.
With the Fight over, All things seem to be back to normal. But I wonder how long will it last and will Cindy keep her promise. I was angry with Penny, She was one of us. But to me today she had became a stranger someone I did not know anymore, and what impressed me most was Ann, she was normally quiet and demure at that moment she gave everything to pull the girls away from Christina. I was giving credit to Jasmine as well but I just never had the thing for praising her.
Reaching the MRT station, Jasmine and Ann went to the toilet, while I left 2 voicemails, one was for Felicia, asking her to look after Christina and page me if they needed anything. The other was for Christina Telling her I wish I was with her now and I really missed her.
We went up to the platform and waited for the train
Jasmine: Where are we going now?
Me: go home lor
Jasmine and Ann: ok
We boarded the train
Me: Ann, you surprised me.
Ann: Huh?
Me: The way you ran out and pulled the other girls, I was shock, I did not expect that from you.
Ann: It was all that I can do.
Jasmine: I did my part to help too ok
Me: Then you want me to give you medal huh? or you want publish newspaper?
Jasmine showed me a irritated face and turned away. (yes Lawrence 1 Jasmine 0)
I began to like Ann more her character and her behaviour, seriously if it was now i will take her as a wife. but to the me in the past she was far too quiet.
Finally the train reached Bishan and i started move towards the door, the girls followed me which did not bother me as i thought they were saying their good byes, but as i step off the train they followed too.
Me: I thought we were going home?
Jasmine: Your home right?
it was a palm face moment for me but figuring it was still early and we can have lunch together why not.
Me: okok, we go buy lunch first.
We exit the Station and I looked at the girl, I did not know what they had in mind for lunch. their standard very high like that.
Me: So what you girl What for lunch?
Ann: You decide, I eat the same.
Jasmine putting her head slight down mumbling: you decide…
I looked at Jasmine
Me: what you say??
Jasmine Can you please decide for us, as we don’t know the place well. this is where you stay.
Me: Ok, Don’t know where was it we always hang out.
Ann smiled and Jasmine hang her head lower (Lawrence 2 Jasmine 0)