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It does help a little to form an image of your description, but I am fine without it as well. For me personally, I will “slot” in my own characters based on your description
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Yes as long as not unrealistic. Superb story thus far by the way TS. WE NEED MORE!!!
Thanks for the feedback! Any other opinions?
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- Lol I guess we think similarly. I am hesitant to put an image on Doreen and Chelsea for that very reason. Hoping the characters form the ‘perfect’ image from a reader perspective.
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lovely story!!
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Yes, very interesting too
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Supporting a great story! More and fasterrrrrrrr
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Support here too
Thank you bros! Really appreciate the support.
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Sibei hot thread!
The way Eric is being teased makes me want to be him right now..haha..
Cheers
Badboy
Thanks for support bro! Eric is a ‘badboy’
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Bro, your story too good. You need to go faster. The suspense is killing me.
Bro, you flatter me. Nowhere near your stories. But your constant support along with the other readers’ definitely motivates me to continue the story.
thanks for all the response and comments! Keep them coming hahah
Meaning to say… the hand that is pressed on to mine… is Judy’s. The boobs and V that was gliding and teasing me… that was Doreal.. I do not want the moment to end. I forced my hip up a little, my dick giving Doreal a slight flick and she gasped.
Mel: Ok. FASTER SHOW THEM BEFORE THE SONG CHANGE!
The girls stepped back.. f*ck the moment ended.. cheekily I made a slow turn over to my side and side stepped in the direction of the sheet. The crowd reacted in awe… the girls ‘UHHH??’ the guys.. ‘WOOOO’!!
Ray: THAT’S MY BRO! THAT’S MY BRO!
Girls: O..MY… GAWD…
Followed by an array of laughter..
Doreen: PASS! HAHAHAH
Song change: “Rihanna – Don’t stop the music”
Music starts… “Please don’t stop the music, music, music..” Nothing more appropriate than this now. PLEASE DON’T STOP THE MUSIC. The group of us are scrambling.. I know for sure that no one is willing to go down on the floor because the sheet is off the ground. Crawling will expose our nude bodies to the crowd. Discreetly, I’ve been kicking the apparels all over the place to make it even more difficult for the girls to get hold of anything. So much so that I found myself in some kind of trouble as well.
Crowd – ‘I WANNA~ TAKE YOU AWAY~! Let’s escape into the music Deejay let it play! WooOOooOO!!!’
Me: DOREAL!! WHERE’S YOUR SHORTS??? PEIFEN PLEASE LET ME HAVE IT!!
Peifen: HAHAHA I CANT FIND IT EITHER!! WHERE’S YOUR SHORTS ERIC????
Chelz: HAHAHAH DOREAL…..
????
Doreen: DEAR!!! I SUGGEST.. you find an alternative!!! Doreal’s FBT is in Chelz’s hands..
WHAT?!
Doreal laughing: HAHAHA I threw it to the crowd.
Doreal?! WHYY??!! SHITTT
Guys: GIVE US ERICA!!! HAHAHAH
The song is midway through I don’t know how long more till it ends. The girls behind me screaming I see our dreams coming true. All I need is something to cover my dick! I am pretty sure I felt a couple of bra and panty, all of which are useless to me.
Doreen: 5… 4…
I grab whatever I can find on the floor, this feels long enough.. I think it’s a skirt of one of them. Instead of wearing it, I turned it sideways and tied is around my body..
Crowd: 3…2…1!!! HANDS UP!!!
Doreen: You can remove your blindfolds now.
I remove mine.. my eyes squinting.. taking time to adjust to the bright lights of the room. Doreen is standing in front hugging on to me and laughing. This is a surprise. I look across.. Mel somehow managed to grab an extremely tight fitting bra and panty.. Peifen found another dress and Mel’s tube top. Doreal is wearing my floral shirt and trunks.. what a… sight… Judy got hold of Doreal’s top but she has it inside out and I don’t know who’s panty she has on.. I certainly hope not her own.
Me to Doreen: Are you ok??
Doreen: Of course Dear. Why not?? Hahaha thanks for being so spontaneous!
I hug on to her still a little confused at the situation.. the crowd is having a great time though. Everyone spirited, laughing and somewhat dancing with drinks in their hands.
Doreen: Forfeit passed!!!
Wait…
The music changes ‘ LMFAO – Sexy and I know it’
Crowd – ‘GIRL LOOK AT THAT BODY~ AHH~… I’m sexy and I know it~’ the guys gang are only in their trunks and undergarment.
The girls that were not part of the forfeit start teasingly stripping as well. Van leading the charge holding on to Ali.. she slowly uses her chest to pump against Ali’s left shoulder and then.. in a swift motion, removed her top.
Chelz following suit while not holding on to Gary, she is dancing in front of him. Weaving her body sexily before gently pulling down her tube ‘Wiggle, wiggle, wiggle yea (shaking her boobs along to the music), revealing her bra. Gary holds on to her but she pushes him away playfully using her index finger, teasingly telling him ‘No no Gary’
Maybe I’ve been asking the wrong questions. It shouldn’t be are you drunk. More like are you on drugs?! What is happening?! This seem totally nonsensical.
Doreen leads me to the centre of the room where we joined the rest of the group. Chelz spotted us and came dancing around me while Doreen in similar fashion, removed her headdress, pulled down her spaghetti top a little and started grinding me.
I look over to Ray and Gary. What is going on here??? The guys are paying no attention to me. Gary just giving me a series of head nods.
Lily, Abby and the other girls (Glad inclusive) all hands up in the air, slowly.. but surely removing their tops. Their bras.. progressively popping into sight. Mel, Doreal and Peifen in whatever attire they are in bouncing to the music.
Doreen: Dear~ you ok??
Me: I am?? But..
Chelz: Of course he is… (biting her lips while glaring at my raging erection)
None of what the group is doing is making any sense or helping to calm my nerves..
Doreen laughs as she walk into my arms. Moving her hips.. she raised her right knee to gently brush against my thighs..
Me: Dear??? (I look at her… what are you doing..???)
Doreen looks at me with and places her left palm on my stomach, fingers facing downward. She performed a running man motion with her fingers.. slowly trickling down to my 20 min long erection.. cheekily giving it some swab while we’re swaying to the music.
Doreen: Are you.. loving this?? (she grins)
Me: I am.. but.. I have you ask.. are you guys high on something??
Doreen laughs: NOO!! I… I…. (she’s too embarrassed to continue)
Doreen: You ask Chelz! (she turns away while still hugging onto me)
I give Chelz a puzzled look.
Chelz: Hunz wanted this.. :P
HUH? Chelz used her head to signal me.. staring at Doreen and moving her head toward the entrance/rooms. I give her a super confused look but I think I know what she’s getting at.. leading Doreen away from the party. We headed back to our room.
Doreen entered and locked the door. Checking the toilet to see if there are others – perhaps learning from the prior experience. She then cheekily walks into my arms.. our eyes locked in with each other.. she slowly moves her left hand to undo the knot that I tied for the skirt.. it fell off instantly. She looks up and pausingly move her head upward until our lips touched. Her left hand stroking my d*ck.. very slowly. I move my right hand under her top. Slowly following the pace of our kiss and her stroking.. I made my way under the bra of her left breast..
Doreen: UHMM~
Her breathing starts to get deeper as she takes a step forward pushing me toward the edge of the bed. I carry her up and gently placed her on it. She adjusts herself into a comfortable position. We continued making out as I run my fingers under her skirt.. performing the same tickle stunt she liked up toward her panty.
Doreen: UUHHMMMM.. Dear~
Her left palm squeezing against her left boob. Right hand slightly clenched placed over her mouth.. I start kissing and licking her neck.. giving small sucks along the way as I use my hands to pull down her top revealing her strapless pink bra.. moving my hand behind her back while she assisted by pressing her chest upward.. I unclipped it. My small sucks continued while I kissed the outline of her breasts no covered by the bra before pulling the bra aside. Her boobs are freed. Her eyes are closed.. her breathing is heavy.. her chest pumping up and down.
I kissed my way toward her left nipple.. giving it a light blow before lightly licking it.
Doreen: OH MY G*AWD~
She puts her hands over my head as though begging me not to stop. I continue teasing the left nipple with the slurping.. all this time, my left hand is sliding up and down her thighs, occasionally circling round the outside of her panties around the region of her clits. Slowly, I kissed my way to the right side. As I moved over.. Doreen used her left hand to continue fondling she squeezing her left breast.. seeing that she liked it, I used my right hand to push her hand aside.. taking over the carassing of her nipple.
Doreen: AHH..~ YES…. OMG…. OMG…
Kissing my way downward, I progressed to give the thigh regions a kiss. Before pulling down her light pink panties patterned with small red hearts..
Me: Dear.. that’s cute..
Doreen: Do you like it?? It’s.. new… for a special occasion…
Me: I like it but I like it even more when you’re not wearing it…
Doreen: DEAR~~ AHHHH (I pull it down and inserted my left index finger into her hole) OMG….
Doreen closed her eyes.. ‘Oh my gawd..’ I continue kissing her thighs while my left hand increased the pace of the fingering. I slowly removed my finger.. she is super wet below..
Me cheekily: Dear??? I thought.. you don’t like such things…
Doreen blushes: I… I…. (she struggle to find a response)
I removed her panty entirely, positioning myself in a missionary position, my d*ck entered her for the first time..
Doreen: UHMMMMMMMMM! (a loud moan)
*At this point I hear some noise at the window and the door* hmmmmmmmm
Doreen: Dearrr don’t stop….
Me: As you wish..
Doreen: AH!! OMG.. (she push her hair backward as she bit her lips while my hips switched gears to full throttle) Take me!! I love you!
Me: I love you too dear!
Doreen: Dear.. turn me.. turn me over…
Ok… We switched over to a doggie position.
Me: You like it like that?? (I reinserted myself into her)
The sound of sex echoes through the room (PIAK PIAK PIAKK). I hear more noise over at the window and the door. But no time to stop now.
Doreen: OMG… dearrrr…
Me: Dear.. did you like the night??
Doreen: YES…
Me: Did you purposely plan for this??
Doreen shyly: Maybe???
Hmmmmm…
Me: But I thought you didn’t like such things?? (I give her a deep thrust)
Doreen: AHHH~ but.. Jill… Chelz… they told me some things..
????
Me: What things??
Doreen: I… just wanted… to *AHH* have a memorable 21st…
I see…
Me: So you were hoping for a wild night???
Doreen: Just a little… I.. I… like it when *OMGG* like it when you are aroused… especially by the other girls.. like.. Doreal.. (Doreen tightened her grip..)
All these dirty talk coupled with Doreen’s tightness. Also, sad to say even though this is my first time penetrating Doreen, fleeting images of the girls, Doreal, Judy’s boobs flashed through.. I couldn’t hold it any longer.. I pulled it out turned Doreen over and squirted all over her body and chest. The both of us breathing heavily on the bed as we cuddled. I took the pillow and threw it toward the door.
*Feet shuffling noise* hahahah
Doreen: ?
Me: hahaha I think.. our friends are interested..
Doreen hides her face in my chest: Are you serious….. noooo hahaha I was moaning so loudly!!
Me: ahhaha it’s ok dear.. (I kiss her forehead)
Me: So I’m clear. You purposefully wanted me to erect earlier on because it turns you on?
Doreen shyly nods her head: I know… I’m so lewd!!
Me: No you’re not!!
Doreen: Are you angry??
Me: Of course not?? Hahaha actually.. I kinda liked it.
Doreen slaps my chest: Don’t think you can get away with anything.
Me: Hey.. You organized this???
Doreen laughs: I liked it when.. Doreal told me you were aroused earlier.. :P
Me: Eh…. Hahahh it’s a natural reaction.. I couldn’t help it.
Doreen: I know! That’s why I don’t blame you. And that’s why I like it when they teased it. :P
Me: Really??? What’s with the sudden change in mentality??
Doreen pauses.
Doreen: It’s not really a change… maybe peer influence.. but I knew I wanted to give it to you when I turned 21… you just took it slightly earlier.. (she start using her fingers to draw circles on my chest)
I don’t wish to sour the mood thinking about the unpleasant.
Me: That is one thing.. but the public teasing?? Hahaha
Doreen: That’s a one off! I just wanted to try something slightly wild for my birthday and I wasn’t sure how to break it to you. The opportunity presented itself. HEE
Me: Dear.. while I really appreciate the ‘surprise’ and like how you’re starting to be more open.. can you promise me we’ll be honest from here on? Especially when in front of our friends. I assume I was the only one in the dark?
Doreen: Not really.. only Chelz, Van, and Jill kinda know about my… ‘fantasy’. I just wanted something slightly wilder.. nothing absurd. The rest of the group were just told and acting out of spontaneity.
Really?? I was on the brink of thinking the party was turning into a mass orgy with all the stripping.
Me: The forfeit I get. But the general stripping after. Was that your idea?
Doreen: No. HAHAH that was Jill’s. I just played along. But it was nothing serious. We wanted to just be.. sexy? HEE Just for tonight!
Me: Anything more??
Doreen: NO?? what you thinking you dirty geezer! (she slaps my belly)
Ok…. If you say so..
Me: Just so you know.. I really enjoyed myself. 😊
Doreen smiles and lets out a long yawn: Me too.
Doreen: Dear.. on the topic of honesty.. did you like seeing Doreal naked and the forfeit earlier too?
Did I just build a trap for myself..
Me: It’s only natural that I do I guess??
Doreen laughs: I knew it! :P
Me: But..
Doreen kisses me: No need to explain :P
Me: Speaking of which… why haven’t you asked what I like?
???
Doreen: But I thought you said you like the things earlier?
Me: Yes I said I like them but those were things you imposed on me and I happened to like them.
Doreen looks at me folding in her lower lips thinking what I’m up to…: Okay… tell me..
I whispered to her ear.
Doreen gasps and hits me: Dear!! (her eyes wide open)
Me: Why? It’s nothing too extreme no? I was naked and only with a skirt wrapped around me when the lights came on!
Doreen laughs: Ok fine!! But just so you know I’m only doing this because you like it. (she peck my lips)
We cleaned ourselves up and Doreen got changed as we exited.
Timecheck: 355am
Location: Chalet living room
Everyone is still gathered but clearing the area as we re-joined them. I am hugging Doreen from behind as a form of encouragement. All eyes on us.. I am looking at the guys.. their eyes wide open.. as they stand rooted on the floor it’s as though a chrono-stop was effected. The very same frozen effect I typically encounter. All movements paused. Ali is standing the closest to us half-naked, picking up empty cups mouth slightly ajar. Gary and Ray at the entrance from the other side of the hall, cigarettes hanging in their mouth. Marcus untying the coconuts from the wall mouth wide open. The girls were around trying to clear up.
Me: Guys… Doreen has something to say to you all…
Doreen shyly walks forward: Thank you so much for being here tonight. I really enjoyed myself and am really happy that I spent this milestone with you guys HEE! (she poses) but I’m really tired so I’m going to wash up and go to bed first. Sorry for being a bad host. Please stop packing and go to rest if you guys are tired ok? 😊 Goodnight!! (Doreen takes 2 steps back into my arms as I hug her)
Why the freeze? Doreen is dressed in my Chatuchak bought white Chang beer singlet and her pink panty on. She is not wearing a bra so her side boobs can be observed if you pay close attention. The singlet is tight fitting for me and only covers a slightly below Doreen’s waist. Her striking pink heart designed panty clearly a spectacle. On top of that, Doreen posed her HEE cutely with a bow, I don’t know if any malfunction came along with that.
Crowd: HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
Doreen turned to give me a kiss as she requested for Chelz, Doreal, Glad and Judy to follow her back into the room. The girls ran off with her. Chelz giving me a sneaky grin ‘Happy ending?’ she laughs. I grabbed on to Chelz to pass a quick message.
Me: Remember to lock the door and windows.
Chelz gives me a puzzled look..: Ok?? (she laughs)
She doesn’t get it but I wanted to play it safe. I can’t be sure who’s lurking or… indefinitely rule out the guys. Back to the group, I look over to the guys raising my brow and giving them a wink. Ray and Gary continuing to choke on their cigarette while…
Ali: BRO.. don’t ever do that again to me (he grab my shoulder).. my heart only have this (he gestures a small sign) amount of tolerance.. AHHHH (he grabs his head)
Marcus getting hit by Aud asking what was he looking at as they both laughed it off. Van giving me a thumbs up before continuing her pack up of the drinks. Doreal came on outside to pass me my belongings. Given the room split, guess I’m getting kicked out and bunking in with the guys.
After finding a room to place my belongings, I headed back out to assist the pack-up finding an opportunity to speak with Marcus.
Me: Bro, earlier on at blindmice.. do you recall who was the first person you caught?
Marcus: 1st ah.. I think Doreal. Why?
Hmmm..
Me: Nothing. Aside from Gary, who’s the other 2 spies?
Marcus: Orh. Chelsea and Audrey.
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm….
Marcus: Why leh?
Me: Nothing just asking.
Marcus didn’t question much. Could I have heard wrongly? Strange.. or perhaps I got the perception of the silhouettes wrong. Everything was moving quite quickly so that’s a possibility…
Chelz: WEI! 😊
I extend her a hug.
Chelz: Look at someone all cheerful.. (raising both her brows)
Me: No?? (I try to ignore her and change the subject) thanks for organizing this awesome party!
Chelz: Credits to Doreal and Jill as well. Jill was the one who thought of.. asking the guys to stay haha
Me: hahah nice.. Doreen finished her story?
Chelz smiles: Ummm….
Me: I know you guys were outside la.
Chelz laughs: OMG… hahaha that is hilarious.
Me: She would have told you anyways. Are they washing up?
Chelz: Yup I decided to come see if any more help is needed 😊 but seems like all done.
Me: While you’re here.. can I ask you something?
Chelz: Yea?
Me: I might be a little insensitive to notice.. but how is it you and Doreen are ok with the forfeit earlier but not last Friday?
Chelz frowns at me.
Me: Ok like I said, maybe I am insensitive.
Chelz: You’re talking about Estee?
I raise a brow and nod my head.
Chelz: You mean.. you don’t know why we were upset??? You apologized for the sake of apologizing??!
Shit… did I just did a hole for myself.
Chelz: HMPH!!!!
Think smart Eric…
Me: Maybe I need to clarify. I didn’t know that she liked me.
Chelz look at me puzzled: Liked?! It’s likes.. present tense.
?!
Me: No way..
Chelz gives me a stare: Ok I’m going to give you the benefit of doubt. Estee has always liked you. How could you not have known?!
But the truth is I really didn’t….
Chelz: Anyway. Back that day, when the challenge was announced, the girls on our side passed a joking remark saying lucky we have Eric. He probably wouldn’t flinch. Some girls from the other team overheard and one of administrators made a bet with us that she could definitely make you. We didn’t think that you would allow it so we passed a snarky chuckle. But she was so confident subsequently and taunted us so we took on the bet. Little did we know.. it turned out to be Estee.
I see……….
Chelz: And when she really conquered you… GRR just the thought of it pisses me off (she bites me)
Me: HAA! It was an honest mistake.
Chelz: She spent so much time doing admin with you. How could you not have noticed?
Me: I mean.. I just thought we are good friends?
Chelz: GOOD FRIENDS LIKE YOU AND I? (Chelz rolls her eyes)
Me: No?! you’re my bestfriend?!
Chelz: SWEET TALKER! But good save. Estee had always subtly declared war on Hunz and sometimes I for being close to you.
Me: I didn’t know that… (damn girls are troublesome)
Chelz: Ok now you know. So the feud is with Estee, not so much the act.
Me: Ok got it partner! 😊
Chelz frowns and give me a pinch as I extend out a hug to her. All’s good now!
Judy comes out from the door in her training tee and shorts with a towel around her neck, her hair is wet. She blushes as she saw me.
Judy: Eh.. Chelsea, we’re done. It’s your turn. (she turns and return to the room)
Chelz: See now you make Judy awkward also hahahah
Me: And whose fault is that party organizer???
Chelz laughs and gives me a peck on my cheek goodnight. Estee… the innocent looking well behaved captain.. what kind of role did she play.. This is good information.
Timecheck: 440am
Lily, Abby, Van and 2 others shared a room while Jill, Peifen, Mel, Aud and one more shared a room.
The guys and I bid our goodbye and similarly headed back into the room. Sadly, it’s 2 single bed. We pushed them together. The guys did not prepare to stayover so they did not have a change of clothes but they showered with a shared towel (gross for some but anyway..).
Ali: Aye don’t because I black you all ask me sleep on floor ah!
HAHAH. By virtue of size we eliminated Marcus. Also from the countless training camps. We know he snores so leaving him on the floor makes sense.
Ray sits up: Can sleep one meh chalet?!
Me: … What you up to now..
Ray: No cards.. cannot gamble.
Gary: No more alcohol.. cannot drink
Ali: Talk cock again lor.
We all look at each other before all eyes turned to look at me. Fuck.. they’re not going to let me go until I tell my story..
Gary: How to sleep? our warriors all still got ammo leh. You at least entertain us la.
Shucks… Before I got to my story, I asked them to share some details about what transpired through the night. True enough during the blindmice, Ray was indeed tagged with Jill. They were playfully trying to sabotage each other by making one another moan. Ray was fingering Jill at the corner of the dining area. Gary mentioned that his night was focused on Chelsea. But because she is also a spy in the game, he couldn’t make any bold move. While they were drinking and dancing, he did make slight brushes against her butt and breasts of which Chelsea did not allow for a more than 1 second stay. But that in itself was good enough to get Gary and the rest going. During the game itself, he was trying to spot for Van but couldn’t find her. Ali started cursing himself ‘Knn.. bodoh….bodoh! (he palmed his head)’ hahaha, he was too into the blindmice and trying to hide if not, he would have made use of the opportunity. That said, he did have some fun with Van today. Although just dancing, that was in its own way, good enough for him. Loving Marcus was all about Audrey. We digressed to speak about how Doreal is actually quite a different persona to Doreen although they were equally surprised at the advancement of Doreen’s openness. After some gossips about panties and breasts, the focus switched back over to me.
I explained that I wasn’t sure whose boobs I touched during the forfeit. They were so damn sure I touched them all but frankly, aside from the one breast whom I assume to be Judy’s… the rest was a blur. I proceeded with vague details about my ‘happy ending’ with Doreen. They were totally in denial claiming that they heard the euphoria over from the window side. So ok that was them hahaha we said our goodnights and all hoped for sweet dreams of the girls.
Not long later… ‘yiiikkkk’ a creaking sound from our opened wooden room door. I doubt any of the guys are asleep.. out of a sudden, the bed tremors in pauses. What on earth??
Girls: ‘Shhhhhh’
The lights in the room are off, the silhouettes cast by the light of the open door revealed 3 figures sitting on top of the bed, 1 standing at the bed side.
Girl voice whispering: Marcus! Audrey is in room B! go now!
Some stumble and feet shuffling noise as the shadow of Marcus exits the room while closing the door. The light goes off again. I am stuck in the middle of Ray (on my left) and Gary (on my right).
Jill leans over and lies on top of Ray..
Jill whispers: Here comes your reward Professor and friends..
Ehh…
Jill whispers: Wait, who’s this?
Ray laughs and whispers: It’s Eric.
Jill: WHAT?!
Me: Sorry. I don’t mean to invade.
Girls whisper: SHHHH!! The walls are thin
Oh yes no shit.. I feel someone crawling on top of me..
Mel whispers: Helllooo.. (she uses her nose to brush against mine)
????!!!
Peifen whispers: Aye! So dark, how Katie watch?
Katie?!
Mel rolls over from me to Gary and starts kissing him.
Jill whispers: Turn on the toilet light and open the door?
Katie complies and does so. The light revealed the girls in their t shirt and undergarment. All except Katie who is properly dressed with shorts.
Jill whispers: Eric.. (she run her left hand down my body) you’re welcome to watch or..
Damn it.. With Katie around? I guess that’s a no thank you. I have a reputation to maintain. Why.. why did a junior have to tag along.. I couldn’t risk it.
Jill laughs: See. Mr Nice Guy.. whatever.
I got myself off the bed and checked in with Katie. Wondering if it’s because she has no place else to go and ended up here. As it turns out, she genuinely wishes to see how this turns out. Maybe it’s Jill’s prodigy in the making. I whispered to them enjoy (cursing myself) as I exited.
Just to be sure, I went on over to Doreen’s room to discreetly check on the door. It’s locked – good. I went round the back to check on the windows. Passing by the guy’s room first. It really isn’t soundproof at all. With all the attempts at whispering, the faint moans and some dirty talk could still be heard. I eavesdropped for awhile, Jill being the closest to the window with Ray..
‘Jill: URGHH, I love the professor’s d*ck
Ray: then take it.. lick and suck it goooood…
Jill: MhhMMMM.. ‘
Although I had just ejaculated earlier, all the noise is causing my little one to feel something. Only bad thing is I’m feeding mosquitoes out here. Deciding to check on the girls’ window before heading back for more eavesdropping – all good until..
‘Girl voices: URRRFFF’
‘AHHH. AHHHH….’
‘URFFFF..’
‘OH MY G*WD…‘
They are very faint.. very very faint but definitely coming from the inside. I cannot stick my head against the window because my silhouette will appear.. I tried paying harder attention but after 3 mins, it went silent. Am I hearing things again?
Curiosity got the better of me as I abandoned my post and headed back inside to check on the door again. It’s still locked.. I lost interest in eavesdropping to the group sex. I headed into to the living room, turned on the fan and lay on the 3-seater sofa. I’m pretty certain of what I heard but it is strange. My thoughts start to wander.. moving on to Estee. I wonder if she really had a part to play in what transpired. For awhile now, my main suspects are still Sim and Clement. I hypothesised the possibility of them following the bus to the are-you-game venue.
Slowly I drifted into sleep.
Timecheck: 815am
I woke up to a sore neck and back. Damn the wooden sofa and group sex party. I should have taken the bed. Doreen’s room is still locked. Going in to check on the guys, the 4 of them asleep. The girls must have returned to their room.
Gary and Ali woke up to my entry and we decided to head out to get takeaway breakfast for the group. We only had the chalet till today. So 12pm is the check-out time.
Timecheck: 945am
Location: Chalet
It took us awhile to get the food as we had to drive out to a hawker centre about 15 mins drive away to get the food. We grabbed a variety ranging from economic beehoon, carrot cake, nasi lemak and Chinese pancake. We got greeted by the group who were mostly awake lest 2-3 still lazing in bed.
Doreen and Chelz weren’t there. We placed the food in the dining area and everyone helped to prepare them. Moving on to check on Doreen.
Me knocking on the door: Good morning ladies~
I got greeted to a somewhat stale atmosphere. Only Doreen and Chelz are in the room sitting on the edge of the bed in their training attire.
Me: What’s wrong?
Chelz: Mmm nothing I hope. Hunz has something to ask you. (Chelz gives me a solemn head nod)
Me: Dear?
Doreen: Dear.. can I ask you.. where were you on Thursday?
Thursday.. I’m guessing where this is going. I had told Doreen earlier on that I was out with my parents.
Me: I went out with Pa, Ma?
Doreen: Did you go anywhere else?
Me: I went to eh…
Shit think Eric think…
Doreen looks down and starts sniffing as Chelz went over to her side to hug her.
Me: I..
Chelz looks at me and shakes her head as though telling me not to try. She hands me a box marked ‘Happy birthday – XoXo’. She whispered something to Doreen before standing up grabbing my hand and exiting the room. I retrieve the items inside. It is a series of photos, taken from Thursday. Showing me seated in the Gym. A shot of my car and carplate with Estee looking in, the photo can easily be perceived to be me picking her up or meeting her with a date and timestamp from 8pm through till 1030pm. Another photo of me entering the car.
Chelz: Someone placed this at the porch yesterday evening and we thought it’s a gift so we brought it in. I really hope you have an explanation?
Me: There is..
Chelz: What is it?
There is Chelz but I can’t find a good way to phrase it. I couldn’t lie to say it was an admin meetup because I said I was with my parents. I struggle to find a reason on the spot.
Chelz starts punching me: Why Liew?! What is it?! (her eyes start puffing)
Me: It really isn’t what you guys are thinking.
Chelz: Then what is it?! Didn’t you just talk to Hunz about honesty? Didn’t I just tell you how Estee is a B*TCH?
I pause for 5 seconds. If I said I went to clear things up with her, what’s there to clear? I earlier mentioned I wasn’t aware Estee liked me. My mind is blank.
Chelz: Just leave Liew. We can’t talk now.
Me: No Chelz wait.
She enters and locked the door.
Me: Dear! Chelz!
Gary walks over moving his head up signalling what happened. I respond with a slight head shake. Clenching my fists with the box but preserving the photos.
Me: Bro, help me look after them. I have to settle something.
I picked up my stuff and left. Damn you Estee. What the f*ck are you up to.
Timecheck: 8pm (Monday)
Location: Estee’s workout venue - Boutique Gym
After I left the chalet, I spent the entire day trying to reconcile the photos. The angle they were taken. While there were none showing me making direct contact with Estee, it certainly did not look good. My failed immediate response probably left me exposed further. All these while, I thought I was the hunter. As it turns out, I am the prey.
Also, it meant that Estee probably knew I was there or in the area. She recognized my car and asked someone to take a photo? Seems like what Chelz said was true. She is doing this out of spite to get at Doreen and possibly Chelz thinking that I would fall for her? Or maybe just sabotaging my relationship is good enough. One thing I couldn’t comprehend is that she didn’t mention about our one night stand.
I made multiple attempts at contacting Doreen and Chelz but they ignored me. I typed out a list of reasons and explanation but none were good enough in my opinion. I struck them all out and only landed with 2 words to them. ‘I’m sorry’.. I have to somehow find my way to get out of this.
Van and Glad were kind enough to text and check-in on me. Although Glad didn’t sound too elated either, it sounded more like a courtesy check. Same for Gary and Gang. I didn’t pass on too much information. I think Doreen and Chelz did not offer any details. This is a mess.
Again working with Estee on scheduling previously gave me insights that during off-season, she’d be more frequent at the gyms on weekdays. The typical Thursday session remains and she will try to slot Mondays and Tuesdays. This time around, I did not park my car nearby. I am dressed in a cap with a workout jacket zipped high enough covering most of my face. My entire outfit is newly bought earlier today. So unless someone hired a private investigator or they are professional enough to tail me the entire day, there is no way anyone would recognize me. Thinking of confronting her to at least make sense of this.
I am standing against a pillar at a building opposite the gym monitoring the entrance. Lucky enough, Estee showed up. I suited up and gave chase. Estee being a regular got pass the front desk easy. I quickly registered myself with the passes I signed up on Thursday. I know I had to strike Estee early, I did not observe her friends coming in yet.
The boutique gym’s locker is in a common area and not in the toilet. I walked up to Estee showing my face. It shocked her. We’re alone.
Estee: Eric?
Me: I’m surprised that you’re surprised to see me.
Estee: What do you mean?
Me: Don’t play with me Estee. What are you up to?
Estee: Huh?
Me: It’s ok.. well played. You won. Doreen and Chelsea are ignoring me. Admit it. Good work.
Estee: Eric.. I have no idea what you’re talking about.
I retrieve the photos to show her.
Estee: What are these?
Me: Your masterpiece isn’t it?
Estee: Seriously Eric I have no idea what you’re talking about.
Me: Stop denying. Isn’t this you looking into my car?
Estee: Oh yes. That reminds me I saw your car outside here on… was it Thursday? Were you around here or?
Me: Estee… stop trying..
Estee: Trying what?
Me: Like I said, you win. Why are you denying?
Estee: Won what?
Me: You set me up to break up Doreen and I. Sour my friendship with Chelsea. Well played?
Estee: Eric. You’re nuts. Maybe you do deserve it.
Me: So you admit? You’re doing this because you like me?
Estee laughs: Eric.. obviously I like you. If not I wouldn’t have bothered trying to seek your attention for such a long time. Was I happy that we had a night? Yes. Do I know what you’re talking about? No.
Me: Why did you make a bet with Doreen and Chelsea and taunt them?
Estee: Out of fun? I just wanted to get back a little at them and you. Nothing to the extent of ruining your relationship.
Me: Get back at me?
Estee puts her head down: 2 years ago.. before you got together with Doreen. I overheard Gary and Ray talking..
Me: About?
Estee’s voice started choking up: Gary said ‘Aiya Estee will never be on par with Chelsea, let alone Doreen. I know Eric! He confirm won’t like her one’.
???? You’re holding a grudge because of this??????
Estee: Call me silly. But I still like you. So… I had some small talk with my friends without naming names, they encouraged me to.. you know get back at you and try to have some fun (Estee started tearing). So.. that night yes.. it was my bad, I apologize if that is what caused strain to your relationship. But what you just mentioned… all the photos..
Me: Were others on it with you on the are-you-game night?
Estee: No?
Me: Are you sure?
Estee: I never mentioned my plans to anyone that were present. Only friends from outside the clique.
Me: Who are these friends?
Estee: My friends from outside? The gym?
Me: Did you tell anyone about the…
Estee: No. It’s my only secret between you and I. Something special. I hope to keep it that way.
Should I trust Estee? The softness in me watching the slight tears stream down her face as she wiped them.
Me: Estee, can you promise me to keep this a secret? Not to a single soul, not here not anybody.
Estee nods her head. As luck would have it, Estee’s friends showed up. Estee feigned a smile with her still red eyes upon noticing them from afar. I look at her signalling that I’m leaving and she nods her head. I put on my cap and zipped up. Turning around to make an exit, I walked past the both of them without catching their attention.
Estee: Rach! Mabel!
Girls: Estee!
Rachel & Mabel…….
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chenzong
I could feel the anger and frustration when Eric realised he is 杨过 and Doreen 小龙女。
LOL bro. I laughed hard at this. This brought back so much memories. No prize for guessing the guy in this story who violated ‘gugu’.
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jilltemper88
Just started reading and this is so addictive….
anw curious - pls share who r your fav and/or least fav characters???
my fav is chelz!
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Hardaway1818
Mine is Doreen
Least is Estee because Doreen doesn’t like her too :P
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10019999
Same here bro! My fav is chelz! Don’t know why I feel chelz love Eric more than Doreen. Somehow TS decided to give some secrets onto Doreen.
Thanks for starting this thread man. I’m also keen to know who people generally like better.
It’s Doreen for me. Least is probably Eric. LOL fickled minded dude.
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Hardaway1818
Bro, TGIF! Hope to see more updates
Bro, thanks for the encouragements. Next post is in honour of ‘The Invitation’.