Chapter 14…
Previously in chap 13… I was about to leave home to school for competition when Elaine suddenly appeared at my doorstep!!!
Me: How… did you.. know I’m home…
Elaine: Surprize? Yes! Lucky bet! (Elaine was giving me the yeay sign with a wink)
Me: Yes very surprise… why are you here?
Elaine: Well… I’m here to cheer up my champion.
With that she walked up to me, pressed her index finger on my chest and pushed me backward. I stumbled and walk backwards 3 steps and fell to the nearest sofa near the door. Some of you must be thinking… drama king… how to fall and move backward with just a finger. Bruce Lee or Ip Man is it? Or One Punch Man in today’s context. Well… I was pushed backwards not because of the finger but because of the momentarily shock I am in, at that moment I felt like a puppet anyone would have easily manipulated me. If this was war, Elaine has executed the element of surprise brilliantly.
Falling onto my sofa Elaine follow suit and now she was kneeling down and her face was in front of my crotch. As you guess it, the button from my jeans unbuttoned next and my zip pulled down.
Me: Elaine, what are you doing? (stupid question of mine)
Elaine: Isn’t this obvious enough? You shock stiff ar?
Me: No… I mean… I still need to get to school. My competition.
I remember vividly the time was 4.15pm. I’m to reach school and take the 5pm charter bus. It takes me 20mins to travel to school.
Elaine: Well… that your problem. For you to figure out. Unless you want to stop, even if you want to someone doesn’t seem to want me to stop.
Elaine was pointing and the swell hidden in my underwear. She pulled my underwear down and my 2IC again swing out with pride and glory. In my POV, my 2IC was drawing a symmetry across Elaine’s beauty face.
My right hand fumbled into my right jeans pocket and I took out my phone, I was searching for my captain’s number and I dialled it.
Captain: Yes Jay what’s up? Missed me already? I’m seeing you in less than an hour’s time. Don’t tell me you scare hor.
Me: No la… I have an issue here. Can I meet you guys directly at the venue?
Captain: What’s wrong? Everything ok or not? You don’t be late or disappear leh I’ll f*cking kill you
Me: No no… don’t worry… AR!!!! (Elaine was sucking my dick suddenly while I was on the phone!) Everyhing is okay… it’s great in fact. Don’t worry I won’t be late and do I look scare? Seriously… trust me on this, see you there directly.
Captain: Ok then. Don’t be late hor! Bye!
I hung up the phone and look at Elaine.
Me: You ar! Purposely want right!
Elaine look at me with a glee: Don’t like? So how much time do we have left?
Me: Well… the competition starts at 7pm. I’ll cab at 6pm and reach there earlier just in case.
Elaine: That gives us close to 2 hours! Great!!
Elaine’s head start moving up and down slurping on my dick with the noise made by her saliva. Come to think of it, this is the first time I’ve seen her given me an official blowjob. The other time it was a 69 first, after doggystyle I did had a CIM but I never got the opportunity to really appreciate the view I’m having now.
Elaine kneeling down in her white dress, I can see her cleavage which is a bigger turn on and I can feel my dickhead swell another 10% more. Elaine felt the swell and said: someone is getting into the mood here.
http://38.media.tumblr.com/2996d6070...0b9mo1_500.gif
(cloest to match my view)
Just when I want to settle down and enjoy my blowjob I realise I have one more problem!! The door is still left open!!!
*End of Chap 14!! Someone walk in how? haha…
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Rickey
You’re welcome TS doublejay !
…you’re doing well !…plzz continue with yr juicy stories
…dun stop ok…will reward you with my 9 sweet cherries soon
Thanks Rickey! I don’t know what the cherries or points are for since I’m new but thanks in advance!
Quote:
Originally Posted by
12fingerslong
showing support to bro doublejay, a fellow storywriter~*
appreciate and understand the effort it takes to write down, craft and narrate from memory!
hope u can graduate to getting live pics soon! then no need to grab from the net already.
keep playing, have fun, live life and write more!
good job, up u soon!
Hi bro 12fingerslong, actually writing through memory can be quite enjoyable I realise. Start to savour the moment, very steamy. lol.
Well if my partners are consensual I may product live pics in the future. For now I’ll do what I can to my very best!!
Morning peeps! Only chap for the day liao. Anything else will be late night tomorrow onwards..
Chapter 15…
Previously in chap 14… I was calling my captain to tell him I’ll meet the team at the competition venue straight while Elaine was giving me a blowjob with my living room door left open!!
The lucky thing is I live in the corner unit and I only have 1 neighbour on the left which stays a very old couple. Given the chance they must be watching drama at home so unless they walk out of their house or someone suddenly comes visit. The chances of them witnessing our deed thus giving them a heart attack is slim. Still the thought of possibly being caught in the public is still a turn on… dickhead swell another 10%….
Me: Elaine, babe the door is still open. Someone might see us you know.
Elaine: Rea..lly? 4 yew 2 fixgure wad 2 do (Elaine was replying me with my dick still in her mouth)
With her response it kept me thinking, could it be Elaine has some exhibitionism in her? Since it didn’t bother her we just left it open and the blowjob persisted another 5 more mins. During that 5 mins I can feel my dick loading…. 4 inches… 4.5 …. 5…. 5.5 inches… 6 inches!! Loading complete! My dick was erecting at its fullest now and this is when Elaine stopped.
Elaine: Looks like someone is fully ready now, let move to your bedroom now.
I look down at the damage down my jeans was wet with saliva. Confirm must change jeans and underwear later but still… no complaints.
I still up and went to close my living room door while Elaine run like a small girl excitedly towards my bedroom. When I entered my room I saw Elaine on my bed in all fours, butt facing me.
Elaine: Now… for my champion to have a snippet of his reward!
I knee down behind her butt and I used both hand to swing her checker skirt upwards revealing her bare bottom! And there it was… another surprise! This woman never fails to surprise me. She will pantyless!!
Me: Elaine, where… where is your undies
Elaine replied with a tinge of naughtiness: Well I took it off while in the lift and kept it in my bag. I hope your lift does not have camera. Doesn’t look like it has anyway (I live in an old HDB).
This meant Elaine while sucking me in my living room was exposing her bare pussy to whoever was going to walk past. Now I’m confident the old couple will get a heart attack if they saw what happens and it reconfirms my suspicion of Elaine being an exhibitionist.
http://www.hdtube1.net/t/310x175/18/...6b7eccd1d3.jpg
(Elaine pantyless butt on all fours for me)
*End of Chap… qus…. do you guys prefer shave or with some pubic hair? As I grow up I kinda like it with some pubic hair above… something lk this…
Surprise! No need report to OC suddenly (I’m not a regular) so decided to upload one more chap!
Chap 16
Previously in chap 15… Elaine surprise me the second time wearing a panty-less skirt!!
I was so arouse by the thought I sank my face down her butt eating up her pussy hungrily.
Elaine: Oh…. Ar….. not so rough silly. Do what you did the last time.
I didn’t even start with 1 finger. Immediately I had my right middle and ring finger in Elaine’s pussy while my thumb is rubbing her clit. My tongue was sharing her clit with my thumb.
Elaine: Oh yes… that’s right…. Go on…. Ar…..
About 2 to 3mins later
Elaine: Jay jay…. I need something in my mouth…. Please. I want to eat you up too.
I stood up quickly, pulled down my jeans and underwear and threw it at the side. Elaine also stripped herself naked while waiting for me. We were now in 69 position. If some of the readers are feeling that I’m writing too abrupt just understand that my 2IC was taking control. I wanted no time wasted in the miscellaneous actions like taking off my pants. I wanted to be immerse in the pure lust. This isn’t love making… this is two hungry animals F*CKING!!!
So with our primitive instincts taking over no words were spoken for the longest time. We will just pleasuring each other and enjoying ourselves simultaneously. I was fingering and licking Elaine like there was no tomorrow. Her pussy was glistering in a cocktail of my saliva and her own juices. I was sure Elaine’s face was a mess by now though I couldn’t see it. I felt myself unloading a few batches of pre-cum already. What felt like 15mins later I knew I was cumming.
Me: Oh my god… I’m cumming babe… I’m cumming…
Elaine: I know. Me too. Just cum baby just cum… and don’t stop licking me… don’t stop!!
Elaine move her head up and down faster, her hands came into play stroking my wet stick, I could feel her suction getting stronger. She was going for the kill. I reach my fingers deep into her pussy rubbing her g-spot. My tongue was flicking her clit at a consistent pace.
Both Elaine and I: I’m cumming!! … cumming!!! …. Cum… cum..ming…
https://www.google.com.sg/imgres?img...act=mrc&uact=8
While she release her flood gate into my mouth I unleash my armies down her throat. We both came at the same time. It was my first 69 orgasm!
The time was only 5pm. Both Elaine and I know it’s not over yet…
*End of Chap… Hope this helps you guys recall your first 69!!
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Rickey
Basically agree wif you TS bro doublejay…yes, some hair down there would be nice…hehe…but nothing tat is fixed in life is nice & enjoyable forever…more of the same everyday & you will get sian after some time…like everything else, there must be variety in life…now you see it
…now you dun
…sometimes you see lots of it, sometimes you see nothing at all !
…hope you get the meaning bro !
yr 9 sweet cherries arriving yr doorsteps 2moro morning !…Look out for it…haha
True you are right… I was used to having some hair for a period until recently my partner took initiative to shave for me in bali and it did take me by pleasant surprise! Thanks in advance for the cherries Rickey!
Chap 17…
Previously in chap 16… Elaine and I had the longest 69 session and concluded with simultaneous orgasm…
Elaine stood up and headed to my bathroom as she wanted to gurgle her mouth. At first I thought she didn’t like to the taste of cum lingering in her but later than I found out she did it because she didn’t want me to taste my own cum (very sweet and considerate of her).
While she left my room for that 2 to 3mins… quite frankly I was feeling a bit tired and I rolled sideways and closed my eyes for a while. The next thing I knew, there was motion on my bed, and Elaine crawled up by my side. Her head was resting on my arms and we started locked up kissing again like lovers.
http://devotionalsex.com/tumblr_m4a6…tn9jo1_500.jpg
The kiss was slow, sensual and romantic. At times I would grab Elaine hair and Elaine was be caressing my face while kissing. The slow kissing lasted for 10mins before it turned wet again with our tongues battling, taking turns to swirl and explore each other’s mouth. While French kissing my hands moved towards Elaine’s neck and start giving her a gentle neck rub from the back. I remembered Elaine’s sensitive spot was her neck and I begin moving. My mouth was nibbling on Elaine’s neck now. Nibbles turn into small bites, but I dare not leave a mark on it in case she was questioned by her parents or friends (unnecessary trouble). Concurrently I was also blowing air and licking her at the same time (let just say I did a lot of combo on her neck).
Elaine was starting to moan when all the attention given on her neck. Her hands were grabbing the back of my hair tightly. While her hands were busy playing with my hair, my right hand moved up to her firm B-cups and I was groping on her left breast.
As the moans got louder my supposedly exhausted dickhead suddenly seem to have his own ears. Like a coma patient, my 2IC decided to respond in dramatic fashion by waking up bit by bit upon hearing his lover’s voice. It was brought back to life! (In drama shows this would be the scene when you call in the doctor! It’s a miracle!!)
Elaine has yet to notice my 2IC waking up as her eyes were still shut. I also started to realise Elaine’s legs were moving, her thighs were rubbing against each other. I took it as a signal and my right hand went down on her, rubbing her clit gently with both my index and middle finger.
I wanted to arouse Elaine more, but my left hand was still stuck under her neck so I decided to change position. I climbed on top of Elaine and decided to attack all her sensitive spots at once. While my mouth was busy kissing, licking Elaine neck. My left hand which is free now was feeding Elaine’s mouth as she was sucking off my fingers. My right hand continued playing and alternating between her boobs. And my already awaken 2IC was rubbing Elaine’s clit and pussy lips at the same time…
http://media2.giphy.com/media/dg8mBEmZBKKeA/giphy.gif
End of Chap 17… Do you guys have a different definition between love making and f*cking? I sure do…
Chap 18
Previously in chap 17… unleashing all my sexual acupuncture at once!
I continued my onslaught on Elaine’s body relentlessly because there was something in my mind I wanted to achieve and I was willing to spend all my energy and effort in order to achieve it. I imagined Elaine as if she was in some of those hentai scenes where tentacles were attacking on the sensitive spots on the victim all at once except I was that monster now.
https://www.google.com.sg/imgres?img...act=mrc&uact=8
(my imagination)
Elaine: Jay… baby.. What is this… oh my god… I don’t know what I’m feeling… this is so good… I’ve never felt this before…
Me: Babe… shh…. Just enjoy yourself. Take is as my way to show gratitude of your support…
Elaine: No no… you don’t… ar…. (Elaine was moaning and trying to talk at the same time) understand… my mind is too stimulated… it’s too confused… it’s like having more than one man touching me…. Ar…. This is…. This is….. too…. Much for my body to handle…..
Elaine’s statement assured me I was on the right track and I was getting there, physically it’s quite tiring but it’s worth it. At least Elaine is well worth it. And here it comes!! My last burst of fire!!! Without warning I suddenly increase my intensity of all my attacks! The best way to describe this was like running a Ferrari, reaching 0 to 100km/h in just seconds!
Elaine: OH MY GOD!!! JAY JAY STOP STOP!!! I’M GOING CRAZY… I’M I’M LOSING MY MIND… LOSING MYSELF… OH GOD… STOP… NO NO… DON’T STOP… OH SHIT… OH SHIT I DON’T KNOW WHAT TO EXPECT ANYMORE….. AR…AR…. ARGH!!!!!
And I have achieve it… pure orgasm without any form of penetration. Proud of myself I took in and let out a deep breath. Elaine was motionless for a few seconds before her body was hit with some small waves of spasm before talking again.
Elaine: Oh my god baby… I could have fainted there. I’ve had such an orgasm before. It feels so good…. But… but….
Me: But what?? (I knew what was coming but I just needed to hear her answer)
Elaine: But… I need more now… I want to have another orgasm but with you inside me this time.
Me: Babe there no time left you know. I don’t think we can have another round.
It was partially true. The time by now was already 5.35pm. Based on the mess I’m in I think I need another shower and I also need to leave my place at 6pm sharp. Having said that, I was just teasing Elaine. What I have successfully achieve or unlock is what I call the “Nympho Mode” or as most people term it “Come Fuck Me (CFM) Mode”.
Elaine: NO! Please Jay, please don’t go…. I can’t take it. You can leave me like this. I don’t know what going on with me. I think I’ve lost my mind but I really need you. You can do anything you want just don’t go. Give it to me please… please… one more time?
Me: And if not?
Elaine: If not I may have to find another dick to fill up my pussy. F*ck I can’t believe I’m saying that. I’m such a slut. Sob… sob… what is wrong with me…
Elaine was actually on the verge of tearing. I think putting her in “Nympho Mode” for the first time is scaring her. She actually have another self she may not know just like most ladies. From a confident and independent woman who knows what she wants, Elaine turned into a frail and obedient girl. It’s amazing what one’s mind can do. Having said that all I wanted to was to tease her a little but I may have been too much.
Me: Hush hush baby… hey don’t cry I’m just teasing you silly. We have time for one more round ok?
I lifted Elaine up in sitting position gave her a quick kiss on the forehead and a hug. But Elaine wanted no hug, remember all she needs now is a dick filling her up from the inside. She broke the hug very quickly and again she was on her fours now with her butt titled up towards my face.
Spreading herself she said: For the next however minutes you have left with me, please just use this hole. Use my dirty hole, f*ck it! Do whatever you want with it… it’s all yours…. I’m all yours…
I was in half squatting position now, angled my dick 45 degree downwards perfectly in front of Elaine’s sex tunnel (or as Elaine said it nicely, MY sex tunnel). I was ready to give her another new position to surprise her and dominate her. Aim…. Ready…… FIRE!!
*End of chap 18…
Chap 19
Previously in chap 18… Elaine’s “Nympho Mode” unlocked!!
I gave my 100% into Elaine, launching my fully erected 6” dick into Elaine like an artillery shot in the first thrust!! The thrust looks like it cause a shock wave into Elaine’s body as I could see the wave of pleasure travelled through her.
http://positions-for-sex.tumblr.com/post/94881538911
(Something like that but I was swinging with a lot more force)
Elaine screamed so loud I was afraid my neighbours from upstairs or down may hear us (I stay in HDB). She came at the first thrust.
Elaine: Jay I came! Jay I came!! I came!!!
I wasn’t sure her intention of repeated telling me that she has cum. Because she wanted me to stop for her to take a break? Or it was so good she wanted more? I don’t know and I don’t care, it better be the latter because I have no intention of stopping down. Remember… I’m also in beast mode now.
On a side note… so what position was I in? I know the position as froggy-style. But after researching I realise it was called the leap frog position but mine was still slightly different.
http://badgirlsbible.com/leapfrog-sex-position
.This is what the leapfrog position look like according to most sites. It is a variation of doggy-style with the woman’s butt sticking as high as possible but the men in his knees. Well Elaine was in exact position, however for me instead of kneeling down remember I was in half squatting position.
So my stance was more like this…
http://positions-for-sex.tumblr.com/post/94981250301
This stance and position of mine is definitely one of my trump card to send any woman to cloud 9.
Coming back to the story… the disadvantage of froggy-style was that one cannot keep up with the half squat position for a long time. Between 5 to 7mins was my best. Nevertheless I didn’t care, every thrust I made was given in full strength, and I was striking Elaine like the wrath of Thor.
Elaine was f*cked mad she was speaking nonsense: Oh god…. Saved me…. Helped…. This feels so good…. (So you want god to save you but you are feeling good? So should god still save you? Haha)
In froggy-style it also made me felt like my dick was a hammer while Elaine’s ass is the nail. My objective is to keep hammering the nail till it touches the ground. (Again a disclaimer for this position it can be very harmful for a woman’s spine so be careful). Elaine’s ass lowered inch by inch with each thrust till her tummy was lying flat to the bed.
So from froggy-style we evolved into jockey style seamlessly. I was still giving Elaine my maximum effort and strength at each thrust.
http://positions-for-sex.tumblr.com/post/89563321736
(Jockey position)
http://positions-for-sex.tumblr.com/post/95167498996
(Maximum strength)
Elaine continued to moan and talk crazily again: Ah… ah… ah…… I’m going crazy … ah… ah… my mind is going blank… blank……
I estimate riding Elaine is jockey position for another 5mins meanwhile while Elaine was talking to herself I ignored every comment and did not reply until… Elaine came again and this time she was screaming…
Elaine: OH FUCK!!! FUCK!!! JAY! JAY!! I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU!!!!! I WANT YOU TO FUCK ME LIKE THIS EVERYDAY WHEN WE GET MARRIED!!! FUCK!! FUCK!!! FUCK ~ ~ (the last f*ck ended in a high pitch fade away while Elaine cum).
It was the first time a woman said she love me while I was fucking her but still I ignored Elaine.
Me: Oh f*ck… I’m cumming too.
Upon saying that Elaine suddenly raise her legs and they were locking me from behind as if I said some taboo words to trigger some trap.
Me: Elaine… Elaine, what are you doing… I’m cumming… you have to release me…. Release me!
But Elaine ignored me and continued moaning in ecstasy.
I’ve never cummed in a woman before till this stage and I had my uncertainty and doubts. But to be honest I was also in cloud 9 I can’t think straight. I’m sure Elaine wasn’t thinking straight either. This is why people may shotgun, so next time don’t say confirm can control and won’t shoot in. If one can be so logical having sex most probably he has yet to enjoy to the fullest emotional level.
Since Elaine seems determine to not let me go I might as well just enjoy to the fullest, I clenched my muscle keeping my dick to its most solid form and I gave my last burst of fire. 69 thrusts (ironic) I counted before I release my last artillery shot into the enemy based camp.
Me: AH!! AH!! ARGH!!!! TAKE IT!!! TAKE IT YOU BITCH!!!!
Elaine: yes… Yes…. YES!!!!!!! I… I came again…
End of Chap 19…. Can you guys remember your first creampie?
Decided to post my final 2 chapters here in a go… up a heads up they are not fapping materials. It explains how I ended the relationship with Elaine. A bitter sweet ending… more bitter than sweet actually… at least for me… enjoy!
Chap 20…
Previously in chap 19… Elaine and I both send to cloud 9 and I had my first creampie…
Have you ever felt like the moment you ejaculated time freezes for a second or two. After you have totally emptied yourself your brain suddenly regain consciousness and you ask yourself… “What just happened” as if you were possessed previously. The moment of consciousness is soon accompanied by a surge of fatigue like you have just done a marathon. That was exactly what I felt…
I fell on Elaine’s back with my penis yet to be withdrawn but I can feel it shrink, a matter of seconds later it was squeeze out with some cum flowing between Elaine’s thighs (not a lot because I already had a CIM previously). I don’t remember the time I would assume it being 5.45 or 5.50pm and I pass out on Elaine’s back.
The next thing I know, I felt light slaps on my face and I heard Elaine’s voice…
Elaine: Jay, jay… wake up! Wake up!! 6.15pm already!!
Me: 6.15pm? So? I said and thought to myself…
Me: 6.15PM!!! SHIT!!
I ran to my closet took a fresh set of undergarment and jeans race to the bathroom and took a quick rinse, I was out and done in less than 5mins. Elaine was already dressed and prepared to leave too. I walked into room got all my belongings, wallet, phone and what not and took a quick glance on the mess on my bed.
“I hope my mum doesn’t see this and asks for an explanation” I thought to myself. When I left the room I closed my room door hoping my mum will not open it (ostrich strategy… haha).
Elaine and I left together, I couldn’t send her to the bus stop but she waited with me at the main road for taxi. We didn’t spoke, I was frantically searching and praying a cab in green lights would appear because the time was already 6.25pm, peak hour. I remembered Elaine holding onto my left arm waiting for taxi with me quietly. Another 5mins I finally manage to get a cab, I look back at Elaine and said.
Me: Sorry I cannot send you home back today. I’ll make it up for you okay?
Elaine: No worries, it’s my fault I appear suddenly. I feel sorry now, I hope you won’t be late for the competition.
Me: Yea I hope I won’t be late too. Haha. Anyway don’t feel sorry I’m really happy you came to surprise me, I mean it!
Elaine: Really? Ok. Don’t talk le, go now… good luck later! Make our school proud, make me proud!
I got into the cab and was waving goodbye to Elaine, took the last second chance to admire her beauty once more with the glow still on her face. As the cab left and soon Elaine was no longer in view I had this uncertain feeling which was unexplainable. Back then I was also trying to get myself to focus on the competition so I ignore that feeling. Looking back I now understand what the feeling meant, it was more of a premonition I guess…
… That was the last time I saw Elaine…
Thank goodness I was only 5mins late for the competition. We got third again as expected. If any one of you reading this thought after the magical moment with Elaine will make us second or first sorry to disappoint. Let’s just say I don’t live in such fairy tale endings.
As I’ve mention before Elaine and I thought in same school we have never had the fate to see each in campus. After the competition of course we resume texting, I told her about my third place again but this third place I was so much happier because she appeared. And her company and encouragement meant a lot to me. Through text we also spoke about me ejaculating into her, she was assuring me her period was coming and a week later it did come (thank goodness!).
As the exam period was coming, Elaine and I didn’t had the chance for any more dates. We were just busy mugging respectively, sending each other messages of encouragement. Looking back again I wonder why I didn’t suggest to study together. But I’m glad I didn’t anyway, we may be too distracted with each other’s body than to study and I did not want to affect her studies.
After the exams was semester break. Elaine is actually a Singaporean PR, her immediate family (mum, dad and a sister) is in Singapore but if not everyone else is in the rural parts of JB. She told me she would go back and visit her grandmother whom she love dearly every semester break. Her grandmother was very old she wanted to spend every possible moment with her. She did tell me that the place she stayed was really very rural and connections is bad so she will try to keep in contact with me whenever she can.
I come from a below average family, I pay for my own school fees and my own living since graduating from secondary school so semester breaks are the best opportunity for me to slog and saved enough to survive for the next semester. Just like that two months has passed without any contact at all.
School was about to resume and I remembered one raining night… it was close to midnight for sure I remembered I was sleeping when I suddenly received a phone call from Elaine…
*End of Chap 20… looking back there were so many hints from Elaine I’ve probably missed…