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Originally Posted by
bird14
Great story. So did get back to the habit of visiting club/pub again?
Not really bro, I only consume alcohol socially now, coz it’s sibeh fattening!! haha
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Originally Posted by
xpinkyx-moment
Finally Finished reading =)
Thankz for sharing ~ Feeling heartache after reading =)
Lifes goes on =)
Yea… society is always realistic and pushes people to move on
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Originally Posted by
Cayden
Hope ‘Jess’ is doing fine and my best wishes to TS.
Thank you for the story. It’s really nice.
Thanks bro
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Originally Posted by
SomeGuy_sg
Very bittersweet
I guess all bittersweet r/s leaves deep impacts…
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Originally Posted by
asspanker
Ts, nice sharing an average Joe story..
Haha, thanks bro… but i guess i’m a “below-average” joe… haha
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Originally Posted by
Kenneleon
i came for a sex story..not a sob story…hehehe
very nice story…the emotions…really filled me with sadness..
hope everything is ok now..
Everything is fine now bro, thanks.
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geordie07
seldom post nowadays but had been intrigued by your story. well written and for that you get all my upz from my two senior accounts.
what started as a standard “meet my friend who is an fl” sexual story became a drama serial worthy of TV scripts or an episode in fatal seducations 4
this story is nice in the sense that it is believeable as well as rather real…the shadow of an abusive childhood, of a kind benefactor with a dark side (sugar daddy), of an FL finding love and KC and then ending with leaving with a broken heart…well done.
Probably mindfucked some of us too with questions drumming through our heads…
Did you really love her or was it just getting used to her being the one beisde you when you wake up? If you do love her, you will not lose contact and try ways and means to find her? or you realize perhaps she isn’t what you want?
Did she really love you or just want to settle down with someone nice? once you age, sometimes a nice dependable guy is good enough.
What if she never really did went to Thailand and was just lying and you bumped into her on the streets one day?
You stirred many emotions in us so yes, even if it were fiction, good writing skills well done!
You left me mindfucked with your comments too bro… lol
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Originally Posted by
bigtaukay
it brought a tear to my eye . Well written bro , be it fictitious nor not , sorry to hear that
Thanks for liking it =)
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Originally Posted by
icy_boi
the way u wrote the final chapter.. i tot she was gonna suicide man..
Not emo until that level bah… haha
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Originally Posted by
DEVILOFALLDEVIL
well written and interesting story. emotion of ending is sad. cheer up bro. Will be waiting for more story post.
Planning to write something pure fiction next… but prolly not soon, alot of work to do lately…. =)
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btblue8
Great story, heart breaking
Thanks for the compliments bro~ =)
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Originally Posted by
bigshit
One of the best! Best part is it took all of only ten days from beginning to end without TS asking to be upped! And yet all the bros have appreciated and upped him for the efforts! Kudos!
Haha… Thanks for your kind appreciation bro!! Yea… quite some bros up my points, some left their name and I returned a small fraction of the favour with my miserably humble 1 point… haha
I think those story writters whom asked to be “up” in order to continue the story are simply asking for zap bah… I juz wanna finish the story while i got the mood… once prolonged, no mood le will v hard write..
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Originally Posted by
Griffinx
nice experience bro. everyone of us have that story in our lives to tell. as a matter of fact, as the story went on, i m more interested in both of your relationship rather thn the sex part.
i can see that u have a big heart. Somewhere somehow, she will always be in a corner of your heart. And shld she ever come back to you one day, i believe u will embrace her.
good luck and god speed!
I found my own story a little bit too erotic actually… but I’m glad u liked the story bro! I’m a big guy, naturally I’ve got a big heart… keke… Thanks bro
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fsk1979
Very nice story
Tyvm!! hehe
Thank you all bros/sis whom had liked and supported my story! I haven’t been online this few days and is really amazed to find my thread still alive… LoL
I’m overwhelmed by all your support!! Stay tuned, I’ve got an idea for my next write… just need time to get it done… my next story will be 100% fiction.