It’ll be a pity for this story to end..think the readership is really high..
But, all good shows comes with sequels right?
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Originally Posted by
Hardaway1818
think i have dragged this story too long that it is going stale.
will end the story off this week when i have the time to write the concluding part
stay tuned for the last episode
OMG what are you saying!! You just started a brand new chapter with a great potential
continuing
storyline here.
Seriously dude!
You have a great potential storyline here.
But whatever the case, you are one helluva great story writer. **RESPECT**
TOTALLY blow
the rest of the so called “real” stories claimed by some writers here,
to PIECES
I liked your story alot, I think its very sensual and you’ve made the main characters very much alive with your words.
Please continue with this story if you can.
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Hardaway1818
think i have dragged this story too long that it is going stale.
will end the story off this week when i have the time to write the concluding part
stay tuned for the last episode
No, dont end pls, not yet! ur story is awesome & so intriguing.
It is still v refreshing
Its not stale.
Just the instalments are abit slow.
All readers wait until neck long long liao.
Still awaiting return of the other brother.
sorry been very busy. Wanted to update last week but my thread went missing. Now that it is back, I will find time to update this weekend.
Sorry to keep all of u waiting.
Time: Tuesday 3 am
Venue: Home
I open my blurry eyes and look around. My eyesight starts to focus and I found myself in my own bed in my pitch dark bedroom. I pick up my handphone on the bedside table and press it. The phone screen lights up and shows 3 am.
Angel is not by my side. She is nowhere to be seen in the room. Weird.
I have a bad feeling.
I pick myself up from my bed, put on my spectacles and walk out my room. I have a strong feeling that something is amiss. The corridor is pitch dark. Ryan and Crystal room door is closed.
I walk towards the staircase silently. That’s when my fear is confirmed. From the staircase hallway, I can hear movement.
I crept partially down the stairway and at the halfway point, I see them. I cannot see them very clearly because of the darkness, but I can make out their silhouette in the kitchen.
Despite the fear and anger building up within me, I have another emotion counteracting the anguish, I am getting aroused.
In the darkness, an erotic image is spanned out vaguely in front of me.
A female form is leaning forward onto the kitchen cabinet, her two hands straight in front of her petite frame, pushing onto the cabinets, supporting her whole body. Her body is strongly arched forward in the shape of the letter “r”. Her butt is thrusting out backwards. Her T-shirt and bra are strewn on the floor. Her shorts is at her ankle. She is gloriously naked.
Behind her is a man. Facing her back. He is thrusting forward into the female’s direction. He is fucking her from the back. He still has his T-shirt on but his bottom half is completely free.
That woman is my wife Angel. That man is my son, Ryan.
Angel’s face is slightly tilted upwards, with her mouth covered by Ryan’s left hand while her hair is pulled backwards by his right hand. Her eyes seem to be half closed in the dark. Her groans are muffled by the hand covering her mouth.
Ryan is like an animal fucking behind. His thrusts vigorous and forceful. His eyes are wide open, piercing at the sweaty back in front of him. It seems they have been at it for quite a while as both of them are glistening with sweat.
This goes on for a good 10 minutes before a voice breaks the silence.
“I am cumming. Swallow it.”
Angel turns around, slumps onto the floor and takes his cock into her mouth.
Ryan shakes uncontrollably. Angel swallows ernestly.
Fuck. I thought they are trying to get pregnant? Why does Ryan need to cum in Angel’s mouth?
“Suck it dry. I know you love the taste of my cum.”
It seems like the show has ended.
Suddenly, I heard a loud voice behind me.
“What are you two doing!”
Ryan and Angel shake up and look towards our direction.
I turn my head.
It is Crystal behind me.
Time: Tuesday evening
Location: Home
Me: “You are home early today. Where’s Ryan? You didn’t come back together?”
Crystal: “Of course not. Haven’t spoken a word to him since we caught them in the act last night. I didn’t allow him into our room last night. He slept at the living room couch.”
Me: “Same here. I didn’t talk to Angel since then. She went back to our room but I slept over at the guest room.”
Crystal: “Well we sort of expect that to happen but I didn’t expect them to be so blatant and so desperate.”
Me: “Ya, from the way they were fucking each other, I think they are sex-crazed for each other now. So what are we supposed to do now?”
Crystal: “Ok let me give you some appetizer first.”
Crystal pulls me towards her and moves her soft gentle lips onto mine. I am taken aback by her pro-activeness. Our kiss is gentle and loving. The tip of our tongues are touching each other softly and lovingly. It has been a long time since I have a kiss like that.
The kiss is so nostalgic. Just like our first kiss at the East Coast Park breakwater many years ago, when Crystal was still Ryan’s girlfriend and Angel, the girlfriend of Rex. Many emotions come rushing back to my mind with that kiss.
My hands grab around Crystal’s body and hug her tightly into my embrace.
Me: “Crystal, I miss you and I want you.”
Crystal breaks the kiss first. “Henry, I miss our one and only time together too. Every time I pass by East Coast, those sweet memories always come back.”
Me: “Can we relive that moment now?”
Crystal: “No, not yet. Don’t forget you have Angel now and I have Ryan.”
Me: “But they have already betrayed us. They fucked each other behind our back. Shouldn’t we do the same to them?”
Crystal: “No. Don’t forget they started the relationship because they wanted a baby for me. So it would be too unfair to blame them entirely for that. Angel is such an attractive girl. Which man can resist having her again and again after tasting her forbidden fruit? Ryan is no exception.”
Me: “But Ryan cummed in her mouth. That obviously has nothing to do with getting her pregnant.”
Crystal: “Let’s stick to our plan. We want them to allow us to be together willingly.”
Me: “But what if they don’t agree for us to have sex?”
Crystal: “They will. They have already shown that last night they want to continue fucking each other. We just need to give them a little push later and hint to them that it would only be fair for you and me to have sex with their consent as they betrayed us first.”
Me: “You sure? I think they will come back later to seek for our forgiveness and stop their scandalous relationship.”
Crystal: “We shall see. Leave the talking to me later.”
Our lips are locked together again in a passionate kiss, this time with more vigorous tongue fighting.
“Crystal, I want you.”
Time: Tuesday night
Location: Living room
Crystal and I are sitting in the living room watching TV when Angel and Ryan come into the house one right after the other. It seems like they have met each other outside before coming back.
Ryan is the first person to speak.
Ryan: “Pa, Crystal. We are sorry. We really didn’t mean for that to happen.”
Crystal: “What do you mean? So it’s me and Pa who want that to happen?”
Ryan: “No no no, we know it’s our fault and we are truly sorry towards the both of you, whom are our dearest kins. But we really can’t control ourselves, you know. We just wanted to have our baby.”
Crystal: “Yes of course. We know that. But we already said we wanted to stop that. And both of you continue to fuck each other behind our back. And what’s the cumming in mouth anything got to do with getting pregnant. It’s obvious that both of you enjoyed it.”
Angel: “Sorry Crystal. Sorry Henry. I didn’t enjoy it at first…. really….but it is slowly getting to me. I mean…. it has been a while since Henry and I have such passionate sex but Ryan is really making me feel different, feel loved.”
Me: “So that gave you two the right to do that behind our back?”
Angel: “No no, we both know we have only ourselves to blame. And we talked about it……”
Crystal: “Henry and I talked about it too and we feel….”
Ryan cuts her off: “Pa, Crystal. I can’t stop the urge to make love to Angel again. And Angel feels the same too. Hence the only way is for you two to have sex with each other too…”
Me and Crystal are both taken aback. Crystal is about to make the same proposition but she is beaten to it by Ryan. That makes it even easier.
Angel: “Henry, I know you wanted Crystal too from the way you always peeped at her when no one is looking. I knew it from woman’s sixth sense.”
I am looking at them dumbly like a kid caught stealing in action.
Crystal is trying to look disgusted, “But I can’t do that with Pa”
Ryan: “Please Crystal. Do it for us. I will feel better. And we will have our baby too. Everyone will be happy.”
Power to the max bro if u r a writer i’l be the first in the queue to purchase ur novel n also ur autograph.