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Originally Posted by
pary
Bro YourExcellency, don’t be bothered by any negative comments. Your intentions to share your experience is greatly appreciated.
I’m usually lazy to log on, but do follow your thread as closely as i can.
Your command of english is very very good, and what i like about reading your thread is the many other little descriptions of the environment, the build up, the non-sexual things that seems to complete the story. Of course, the sex bits are very welcome too.
Keep it up please and thank you!
Thanks for your reply. To me, details are everything, otherwise most stories can be written as, “I came, I saw, I conquered.”
Shenzhen
Before long, we had reached the exit for the Eastern Overseas Chinese City (東部華僑城) and I drove towards the foot of the Wutong Mountain (梧桐山). Our ascend up the mountain was nice and cool and I opened the sunroof and wound down the windows. We soon arrived at the clubhouse and when Liz emerged from the car, a manager in a suit walked up to us.
Manager: “
鄭小姐， 你好！好耐無見！棍已經幫你準備好了！
”
Liz: “
真系唔該逝！這位系Leo生， Leo, this is Brian!”
I accepted his clubs after thanking him and he arranged lockers for us. We changed our shoes and within minutes we were already in our buggies, with two caddies in tow. As we wanted to have more privacy to ourselves, we asked the two caddies to take one cart, while we took the other.
At our first hole, I inspected Brian’s clubs for the first time. His clubs were very suitable for me. He used ‘Fourteen’ irons and Maruman woods, Taylor Made rescue clubs, Cleveland wedges and a double ball Oddysey putter, very similar to what I usually use. I chose to tee off from the white tee box and Liz from the ladies’ tee box. I teed off with a rescue club, not wanting to screw up my first hole, it was a par 3, and landed just 20 yards from the green. Liz teed next, and her ball landed about 15 yards from the flag!
Me:
“Wow, looks like I am going to have tough competition today!”
Liz:
“Lucky shot!”
We ended the hole with Liz having a birdie and me a par, and we happily proceeded on. Liz was a good golfer, and she played well that day. I was a little rusty, due to my heavy workload but I still managed to have a few pars but no bogies. I had played at this course before, and it was very beautiful albeit a little too tough. This is a killer course with beautiful scenery for any brothers who are interested in extremely challenging courses. For many of the holes, you would tee off from one hill, between the hole and the tee-box were usually valleys and the rough was extremely overgrown. You would drive your cart along the winding routes and weave through the course, going from hill to hill, hole to hole.
The game ended with Liz hitting 98 and me 105, all thanks to two water hazards. We got showered and changed into a fresh set of clothes and settled down at the café for a drink before leaving. Liz was a member so she paid for the day’s game. We relaxed at the café, sipping ice tea as we enjoyed the cool clean mountain breeze. It was one of the best feelings in the world.
Liz:
“Dinner?”
Me:
“Sure! Where?”
Liz: “
You know this place well, why don’t you decide? I can decide when we’re in Hong Kong!”
I chose a place I knew well, a seafood street in Yantian (鹽田). Some brothers may have been there, its quite popular in Shenzhen, similar to Singapore’s UDMC seafood centre or even more like the old Punggol seafood. There are at least 6-7 big seafood restaurants congregated there, with large tanks displayed prominently outside them, touting the best freshest seafood available. By the time we got there, it was already past 6pm and seats were filling up fast. I drove to the one I usually frequented, and we held hands and occasionally kissed as we happily ordered whatever caught our fancy.
In the end, we had over-ordered. We had 2 different kinds of fish, one steamed and another pan-fried, fresh boiled shrimp, fan scallops, salted crayfish, fresh cockles, oysters, kailan and choi sum. Everything was delicious and we tucked in heartily till we could not fill our stomachs with another morsel of seafood. We had Zhujiang beer to wash down the seafood and we felt truly satisfied. The bill came up to RMB800, which was an excellent deal for so much food. We left the restaurant feeling really full and in need of a stroll. We went further eastwards, back towards the seaside, and took a long slow walk along the beach. I was in love and so was Liz. I sighed as we strolled along the beach, not wanting the feeling to go away.
Liz: “
Do you want to stay the night in Shenzhen or do you want to go back to Hong Kong?”
Me:
“Actually I was wondering that same question! Why don’t we stay here for the night since its Saturday? We can always go back tomorrow!”
Liz: “
Let’s do that! Where shall we stay?
”
Me: “
I know just the place!
”
We got into the car and I drove towards Luohu, to a place I knew well – Queen’s Spa (皇室假期) at Xiangxi Village (向西村). It was as usual, busy with the weekend traffic of Hong Kongers traveling over to Shenzhen to enjoy the cheaper services. We checked in and soon I was in the men’s shower room taking my time cleaning myself, reveling in the wonderful sensations of the hot water hitting against my body.
I took a seat at the waiting area, or as the Chinese liked to call it, the resting area. It was basically a large lounge where you could get foot massages and other services like getting your ears cleaned and dead skin on your feet removed. I took a seat in one of the numerous oversized arm chairs and waited for Liz to finish her shower. She emerged form the ladies’ shower room wearing a pink robe over a matching pink top and loose cotton shorts, standard issue for ladies. We sat down and ordered a foot massage each. The massage was very relaxing and by the time we were done, we were both almost dozing off. We chose instead to proceed upstairs for a body massage. We opted for a private room, away from the main walkways. The masseuses were pretty good, and kneaded away our sores and pains, leaving us feeling really relaxed and unable to move. We rested for little while before we left the room and we were ushered downstairs to the sleeping area. For brothers who have not been there, it is a very special experience. The sleeping areas for men and women are separated, and it consisted of many cubicles (approx. 1m x 1m x 2m) stacked on top of each other, with a sliding door at the entrance. After registration, you would climb into your cocoon-like cubicle and inside it was very cozy and quiet. There was a quilt in case you felt cold but I opted out.
I slept like a log, tired out from the day’s golf and the previous night’s activities ☺
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Originally Posted by
StillLearning
Bonjour Monsieur,
Which part of The True North, Strong and Free, were you in?
If you claimed that your life is a little too bland, then mine must be empty in terms of variety.
May I suggest that you look at and enjoy the good life at home, and cast away your apparent dinghy floating in the sea.
A good loving and caring wife is better than all the spicy mermaids.
Cheers, [YourExcellency]
Less than 200 km away from the border with sub zero temperatures till end of Feb that should be a major hint
Time flies, when I first left, I was a boy, and when I came back, I was an ‘uncle’
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Originally Posted by
thomas88
You can search my thread which I’ve started a few, long ago and you can read them. You’ll find that I don’t request to see the reponse as I just post and post as much as I can.
If everyone can post their stories fast and finished it with lesser pages then those who found and read them would also be easier especially if they’re browsing with their handphone.
I’ve read many thread and most of them I’ll only post 1 comment so as to be able to come back with ease of tracing and I’ll continue to read without posting more comment unless necessary. Just check on the numbers of viewers and you’d know how many readers you’ve got..
Hi thomas88,
You must be in a much more fortunate position than me, you must be not be in a room with nobody to talk to except the four walls surrounding you. I am tired from work during the day and entertainment in the evenings. I have been away from home for more than a month now and it is wearing me a little thin… think of it as maybe I seek the responses as a distraction from my homesickness
Will check out your threads when I am good and sober :P
cheers!
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Originally Posted by
StillLearning
Where we are (with the lakeshore on one of the great lakes), there is sub zero temperature in Nov to Mar, although there are day time high of 9, such as today. If only the winter here is from Dec to Mar, it will be more tolerable. Over here, we can get minus 20 C and minus 30 or lower with wind chill. I better not digress, so that you can concentrate on your next chapter in the continuing saga of “The Scent of a Woman.”
Yes lakeshore does tend to be colder.. and winters are more than a tad too long.. however a drive from east to west on lakeshore during the winter months can be extremely refreshing as you watch the waves crashing onto the breakwaters near the tennis club.. much like the works of the group of seven..
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Originally Posted by
BigBoy2
Hi TS,
Nice story and I can’t get enough of it…. Do keep up the good work and my humble points to you.
Thank you.
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Originally Posted by
pary
Wow..so interesting..can sleep inside the spa? So you just lock yourself inside the cocoon and sleep?
No.. there are no locks, its just a sliding door for you to have more privacy when you sleep, with a light switch inside for a bedside light. Its actually very futuristic looking and fully maximizes the number of beds you can fit into a smaller space, as many as 9 people within a 4m x 4m x 3m space…
Sunday
I was awaken by a knocking on my ‘door’.
“
先生， 你的朋友要走了！叫你起來！
”
I rubbed my eyes and looked at my watch. It was already 10am. I washed up at the shower area and got changed. I met Liz again at the reception and I paid for the bill. Not bad, below RMB1,000 for two people.
We left the place and had dimsum at a restaurant nearby. The food was pretty good and we tucked in heartily, chatting happily. We left the restaurant and started our drive back to Hong Kong. We went back the same way we came and before long, we had arrived at my hotel.
Me: “
You wanna come up?
” I winked at Liz.
Liz: “
Why, are we horny again?
”
Me: “
You bet!
”
I left the car with the valet and we held hands as we walked towards the lift lobby and up to my room. Once in the privacy of the room, I slowly led Liz towards the king-sized bed and gently kissed her on her lips. I roamed down to her neck and nuzzled her, spending time around her ears, licking her ear lobes. She closed her eyes and moaned softly, while tugging at my top. I too, lifted her top over her head and sensually unbuttoned her pants. Soon we were both naked in bed, taking our time to slowly enjoy each other. She started her pilgrimage down to my penis and started a swirling action on the head of my penis with her tongue. She coated my shaft with her saliva, and used her soft hands to grasp the head, causing me to gasp a little with the new sensation. I closed my eyes and allowed myself to fully savor the delicious electric shocks that she was causing at the very core of my senses.
Not wanting to be selfish, I pulled her up and took her by the lips again. This time I wanted to be the lead. I trailed a path from her ear lobes down to her breasts, she was heaving heavily now and I could tell from the glistening trail of cum juice dripping down her pussy lips. Wanting her to be even more turned on, I focused on her breasts, licking the area slowly, making sure I licked the underside of her breasts before moving on to her nipples. Her areolas were magnificent, just the right size and I took one in my mouth and sucked, gently at first, and working up to the strength of a commercial vacuum cleaner (ok, exaggeration here) She arched her back and let out a long sexy moan while using her hands to press my head against her chest.
I trailed further downwards, licking and giving her little bites along the way. I stopped at her belly button and used my tongue to tickle her a little. I marveled at her well-trimmed bush and started with my attack on her pussy lips. I really ate her this time, feeding myself on her cum juices, making sure I didn’t waste her essences. I licked her entirely clean and she was moving her pelvis up and down, demanding attention at her clitoris.
Liz: “
UrgghhhhhhHHHHH…. LEOOOOO…. YESSSSS…. THERE!!!!! GAWWWWDDDDD!!!! SUCK MEEEEEE HARDDDDDD!!!! MAKE ME CUMMMMMMMM!!!!
“
I remembered how she had enjoyed my hard sucking on her clitoris when we made love in her open air bathtub and attacked her clitoris with fervor. I sucked hard at it and didn’t let go till I felt her familiar shuddering start, first from the tightening of her feet, up her thighs, exploding to full force at her pelvis, ebbing away slowly at her chest and finally the groan that escaped her lips as her orgasm finally found an outlet. Her tremors slowed down and became less frequent and I continued my administrations on her lower lips. This time I was gentler as I knew she was sensitive immediately after an orgasm. I licked her slowly again and watched as she relaxed, while still in a state of arousal.
By now, my erection had reached its max, and was throbbing, threatening to explode. The head of my penis was sporting an angry red look and I needed a release. I moved on top of Liz and slowly inserted myself into her. The penetration was smooth as Liz was amply lubricated with both her juices and my saliva.
Liz: (panting) “
Baby… you are such a wonderful lover… I have never had anybody who has made me feel like I had just died and gone to heaven and back…. I want you so badly… I want to feel you inside me… I want to feel your cum shooting in me…
”
I was suddenly aware that I was not capped and did not have a condom ready. I hesitated and Liz, sensing my hesitation, “
Don’t worry, my period just ended on Friday, and I am very regular, it is safe now
”
Not needing any further encouragement and even if I did have any reservations, my lower head completely took over. I pushed into Liz in the missionary position and soon we were rocking in tempo, with Liz matching me stroke for stroke.
Me: “
My god Liz… You’re so incredibly sexy… I could just stay here and make love to you all day long… I have not felt this way for ages… you just bring out the monster in me…
”
Liz smiled at me and kissed me as she rocked even harder. Soon I was getting tired of this position and pulled her up to a sitting position, with her legs straddling me on both sides. In this position, the penetration was not as deep and we could not move as fast, but it provided us with the intimacy that we both craved for at this point. Liz moved slowly, closing her eyes to enjoy the slow lovemaking. I arched my back and allowed her to take charge, first in a slow up-down motion, then alternating to a circular gyrating movement as she began to build up to her next orgasm.
“
AHHhhhhhhhhHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!…. MAKE ME CUMMM AGAIN!!!!! DON’T STOP… JUST KEEP FUCKING MEEEEEE… YOU MAKE ME FEEL SOOOO GOOOOODDDDDDD
”
Liz was getting really vocal now. She was like a woman out of control, with only one aim in her agenda – her orgasm and nothing was going to stand in her way. She increased her rocking tempo, and as I felt her vaginal muscles contracting with increased frequency, I felt my own imminent orgasm building up. I tried to slow down my own release but Liz was making it hard and I was definitely closer to the finishing line than her. I gave my orgasm a final effort of resistance but I could not control myself any longer. I ejaculated hard into her, coming in spurts of hot sperm, filling her vaginal cavity with a primitive growl escaping from my throat. My orgasm sparked Liz’s ascend to her own peak. Her eyes rolled backwards and she arched her back, her hands holding on to my shoulders as she impaled herself on my penis one final time, screaming at the top of her voice as she started on her orgasm. She trembled and shuddered hard, like she was being attacked from the back, and she did not stop till her face was all flushed with blood being pumped all throughout her body. She collapsed hugging my body and curled up in a fetal position as I laid her down gently, hugged her in a spooning position, her favorite post coitus position.
We fell asleep that way the entire night.
Bro Y Ex, I enjoyed the clarity of your narration as well as chronicling the surrounding environment, it really makes me feel like I have been transported into that time zone as well!
[how i wished eh?] It seems so natural that its like watching a movie rolling, but in this case, is your diction that has enabled such a feeling to be experienced via your words and description.
Whenever I read your posts, i tend to choose a quiet moment and to be alone to really enjoy the mood that you have depicted in your story, rather than rush thru reading it. As they say, must have the right and correct ambiance to enjoy!! But hey, that’s me, just sharing with you how I am enjoying your epic tale.
Thanks once again, and I do understand the need to get feedback, so really no issue here with me. Looking forward to more, cheers ………….
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eeemen
Bro Y Ex, I enjoyed the clarity of your narration as well as chronicling the surrounding environment, it really makes me feel like I have been transported into that time zone as well!
[how i wished eh?] It seems so natural that its like watching a movie rolling, but in this case, is your diction that has enabled such a feeling to be experienced via your words and description.
Whenever I read your posts, i tend to choose a quiet moment and to be alone to really enjoy the mood that you have depicted in your story, rather than rush thru reading it. As they say, must have the right and correct ambiance to enjoy!! But hey, that’s me, just sharing with you how I am enjoying your epic tale.
Thanks once again, and I do understand the need to get feedback, so really no issue here with me. Looking forward to more, cheers ………….
Fwah! thank you for your encouragement! if only i had more supporters like you!
But I am getting tired of narrating the sexual scenes, i mean how many ways can you have sex in the bedroom and narrate it so that it still sounds fresh to the readers? So I have decided that I will focus more on our relationship than the sex, unless of course, it is inevitable in keeping with the flow