As promised, I got laid tonight, but the night isn’t over yet. Stay tuned, and hope you guys like the song. Cheers.
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maposo
This is better than Fifty Shades of Grey.. !!
I thank you bro for your sppt and am really glad you liked the story thus far; but I really dunno what to say w/ regard to the very high laureate that you’ve just bestowed upon me.
Many readers will beg to differ, I am sure. 50 Shades of Grey is a global best-seller and fastest selling paper-back. It explores BDSM themes? WND is a story about me and a neighbour of mine. Further, erotic scenes are far and wide apart.
I’m not a big fan of erotic fiction, save for those I read in this forum; so I really haven’t checked out 50 shades yet. But I know of many who have read it, some from the forum as well. They will definitely beg to differ, for certain. Even though I haven’t read that book myself, I believe your high praises are a lil exagerrated as well: Simple, I write for free and I really doubt WND will be able to sell 40 million copies.
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<<totally>>
As always, you….left me hanging at the cliff and not falling down into that abyss of unknown depths of yours this time round.
I got myself a rescue rope knowing you might not be able to deliver due to commitments and most importantly, with that brief moments at the Jacuzzi did somehow feel magical with so much thoughts, physical, feelings all infused into one.
Almost forgotten to address this one. lol
Bro Totally, I did not leave you hanging lo… haha. I promised I’d get laid and get laid I did wad… and I rushed through it, it was supposed to be posted today but I stayed up to update that le. It was a rushed piece of work, with many mistakes, I hope you and the other readers wouldn’t mind. Thanks.
Story Continued… Making Love: Wonderland…
“Your body is a wonderland…”
I sang softly into Lorraine’s ear with her still sitting on my pogo stick, bouncing up and down; Lorraine’s moans were now coming out of her mouth, smooth, easy and fluent. This was the 1st time I had felt her deeply, literally, pun intended.
I moved my hands to the sides of her slender waist, which was still and detached from her fluttering hips like a belly dance, just below her flowing dress. I gave the sides of her waist an affable squeeze below holding the dress of their ends. Lorraine lifted her hands up from my shoulders, her head tilted and eyes still squeezed shut, at my cue as I have them a slight upward tug. Letting out a long hedonistic moan, Lorraine raised both her hands and opened her eyes slowly as I continued to sing to the ear nearest to my mouth breezily,
“You body is a wonder; I’ll use my hands…”
Looking at me now with a soft mellow gaze, Lorraine’s eyes smiled as she sang to the tune as well,
“My body is a wonderland… huh?”
Lorraine’s giggling simper disappeared briefly and reappeared quickly as I pulled the dress off the top of her hands and left in on the water carelessly. I watch it flow blithely on its surface, like a jelly fish if you guys recall, away from us and leaving us to our device that was no longer inhibited. I returned my gaze on Lorraine’s beautiful smiling face, a hair in a wet again and in complete mess, her eyes opened scanning my face attentively for the nano-est of expressions as she moaned desirably and repeatedly.
“I’m thirsty…”
I declared with a mellow smile before sliding deeper into the tub and placing my lips on her left nipple; I gave it a hard, deliberate, suck as my tongue lapped up the water droplets on it. Just water my friends; her cub was 3 and she’s no longer lactating.
Lorraine let out a long pleasurable sigh. Her hands now back on my shoulders moved my neck and her fingers pinched my lopes before moving to the back of my head to pull my closer. I gave her nipple a chew, like how a pup would do to rubber chew toys. I nibbled gently at first to her pleasure, then tugged and twisted to her resistance. Lorraine gave my head a benign smack with her palm and maintained her sensuous pole-dance while I ran my tongue along her contours to her neck and her lobes, lapping up more water along the way. They must have been mixed with her sweat for they tasted nothing like Chlorine, Fluoride or H2O; There was a hint of dry sweetness & intoxication in their taste, like wine.
I flicked her earlobe with my tongue as she rocked on, her swaying increasing in momentum as her eyes squeezed shut once more. With her quickening breathes sounding like music to my ears, I sang once more, slowly, into hers,
“Together since this afternoon, we’ve got this tub for two…”
Yes, I amended the lyrics slightly to suite the occasion. You can try singing it if you want.
“One thing I’ve yet to do…”
I continued as Lorrained moaned on appreciatively, before whispering cheekily,
“after so long… (No this is not part of the song; don’t sing this please!) “
“Discovering me, Discovering you… (Uncovering’s more like it really)”
I sang on in staccatos as Lorraine quickened her movements. The staccatos increased in frequency and rhythms; it isn’t easy to sing when someone is rocking you; and when you increasingly gasping for breathe.
“One mile to every inch, your skin like porcelain. One pair of kissable lips, and your bubblegum tongue…”
I was now running my hands all over her, before holding her close with one hand, while holding both her hands up suspended in the other. Her armpit exposed, I gave them a kiss before sucking her tongue French-ly (Oui! Bubblegums sont destinés à être appliqués sur la langue maternelle avant de souffler!). Lorraine reciprocated in like.
“How come…
Mmmm…
You only focus on one side…?”
Lorraine’s question was broken with gasps as she increased her momentum again, before breaking out into even more broken giggles.
“Favouritism?”
I laughed,
“Are you asking me for more dear?”
Lorraine nodded submissively as I gave to her left side of her body equal treatment as what I had earlier given to the right, starting from her left nipple. I was now feeling pulsating clamps from deep inside her. Lorraine’s gyration increased further in intensity, she was now creating a little series of ripples and splashes around us. Her breathing quickened, before I feel her hold her breath abruptly as she pressed tightly against me, and let out her longest and loudest moan for the night to come.
Lorraine’s head laid slump on my left shoulders as I kissed her hair, her body rising up and down no longer due to her deliberate movements. After a brief rest, and catching her breath, Lorraine slapped the chest of a beaming me who was now adjusting her hair and tucking her fringes behind her ears.
“Oi… can you stop holding back? Or is it the Extra Safe?”
She asked with obvious discontent and disappointment in her tone.
I gave her a smirk as I tilted my bums below her to slide my boner out smoothly. It was still stiff. I gave her wink before we frenched passionately again.
“Like it?”
It was now my turn to ask…
“What do you think?”
Lorraine replied shyly, kissed me once more, before protesting with another slap on my chest
“But you didn’t!!!!!!!”
“I loved it… And I love how beautiful you were as you did me…”
I replied softly before scooping her up.
I won’t lie here; She isn’t as light as I thought, or rather, I wasn’t as strong as I had made myself out to me. Nonetheless, I was determined to carry her downstairs in my arms as I got out of the Jacuzzi, careful not to slip, and walked down the stairs with Lorraine giggling in my arms with her arms around my neck.
“Cause if you want love, we’ll make it… Swim in a deep sea of blankets… Take all your big plans and break ’em… This is bound to be awhile…”
I sang to Lorraine softly, the lyrics for this part of the song original and unamended, explaining. Lorraine looked on at me with wide baby eyes. I knew she understood my message then.
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<<totally>>
I dun listen to ang mo kua, however all the chasing…made me dig out this song for all those out there reading this write out and the man behind it…
Thanks for your sppt and help again bro. Ur posting of the lyrics will help greatly in helping some of the readers who don’t yet know that song appreciate my next update coz some parts of it will be invoked again.
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Originally Posted by
hickeybites
Wow.. you sure have a way with words - or in this case serenading the lady with lyrics of a very suitable song!
“Your Body is a Wonderland” - that is one song which is a sure panty-dropper with many ladies (another fav is “Crash into Me” by Dave Mathews Band)
The way you’ve written about Lorraine & the events, with your attention to the details, makes this memory rich & full of nuance.
Something I believe many of us can identify with… when we discover & remember that connection, degree of attunement with someone …
Looking forward to more of your updates! *support support*
Hi Bro,
M glad for ur sppt in my story and m glad u liked it. I’m no wordsmith; Like you’ve said, I merely serenaded a very beautiful gal w/ the words of 1, i.e. John Mayer. U r right about Crash into Me, its a good song too. Seems like u have a way w/ da ladies
I shld take some lessons from u.
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<<totally>>
Of course…for it is not compiled. I working on it bro, wanted to tell you when I am done. I just started on it 2 nights ago, got a cover page drafted.
Any comments can let me know.
Bro, lol …u made my day! I can’t stop laughing now… if you manage to get a publisher, rmb to divide some royalty w/ me. haha.
To all supporters and readers, I really thank you; I can’t say how much all these means to me really, except alot. It’ll be unlikely there’ll be any updates over the weekends. I’ll try, though no promises.
Bros Totally & SammyNewbie
I can’t quote ur exchanges above as (I) I’m on a mobile device & (II) it’s not economical, bandwidth wise.
I appreciate comments for this thread, which was why I wrote e story in e 1st place; to garner comments back then as e r/s progressed. By tt, I mean any form of comment, both gd &/or bad, or otherwise.
I thank both of u for all ur contributions & help, inc e uploading of YouTube videos, making of a cover page for mPy story or simply spicing it up w/ ur thoughts or speculations. However, I felt compelled to step-in now becoz e exchanges got slightly heated.
There is never an
absolute
right or wrong perspective w/ regards to literature, sex, love & a thousand other things. For e enjoyment of this story for all readers, I really do welcome all perspectives & hope, in e event of different interpretations & perspectives, that we’d all agree to disagree.
Also, Bro SammyNewbie, I hope to clarify; I did not intentionally ignore ur comments; it’s just that most of ur later comments do not warrant any response la. haha.
Thanx for ur invaluable sppts every1. I’ll attempt to update e story later tonight (which cld b really late btw
). Cheers.
Story Continued… Making Love: Out of (With) Nothing at All…
We left the cosmos above us for our own Deep Space at the bottom of the stairs; Below, I set Lorraine down on the floor and dimmed the lights as we both dried ourselves.
“Er… I’m not done yet you know?”
I watch my Durex come off with a snap as Lorraine gave it a rough, decisive, tug.
“I know… Just thinking we should use mine instead?”
Lorraine grinned as she looked at me and flashed an Okamoto in my face.
“This should make it harder for you to hold back…”
She looked so playful as she said that, and so sexy with the towel around her body. I didn’t know how to react at all as I gaped on and took in her beauty.
“So you want me to discover you on a more sensitive level?”
I found myself saying as I pulled her close for another kiss.
Lorraine laughed at my lame joke as we tumbled onto bed. I serenaded her softly once more as I played with her hair, tucking them behind her ears. “
Something ‘bout the way the hair falls in your face…”
“I love the shape you take when crawling towards the pillowcase; You tell me where to go and though I might leave to find it, I’ll never let your head hit the bed, without my hand behind it…”
I sang, putting my hands behind her head, as she laid on the pillow and gazed at me intently.
Lorraine’s towel slid off her body with her lying on it as I undid it with my teeth; I was soon attacking her creamy breasts once more as they lay invitingly exposed. She broke into soft sensuous moans again, her palms behind my head, as my lips, tongue and teeth did as they were supposed to; I was careful not to play favouritism to one particular side although her left side looked slightly more appealing due to the faint cosy lights streaming in from the bay window nearby.
I rose up, just as Big Dipper below did, to give Lorraine a brief peck before my tongue glided down her neck, shoulders, chest, abdomen before reaching her hips at the end of the body; Instinctively, Lorraine’s legs parted as I found my head in between them once more. Lorraine squirmed, as I lapped her hungrily once more exploring her deep lovehole; It was soon vibrating up and down quickly in response and in tandem to my curious tongue.
“You taste so good.”
I told Lorraine a couple of times, as her mellow sighs and moans crackled through the silence of the room. Lorraine pushed my head away slightly, her legs quivering just a little, as I gave her lips down south an affable suck; My lips and the tip of my nose were now wet and moisturized with love juice that tasted vaguely like nectar. I laid on her thigh, as she slowly rose to sit upright, her hands rummaging through my hair lovingly. In the faint radiance, she gave a smile as she motioned gently for me to flip over.
“No one has ever sung to me while making love…”
Lorraine whispered tenderly. Sliding her thighs out from beneath my head, she climbed over my head and laid down inverse on me. As she writhed and slithered down my front, her nipples erect, I looked on at her perky butt cheeks, crack, the cute starfish which wasn’t really chocolate and once again, the pink deepness. Big Dipper roared once more in defiance, as Lorraine’s fingers and nails teased it, before it quickly got forcibly sucked by an unknown force with a pop.
Blackhole came to my mind as I closed my eyes to exploding Supernovas. Lights danced around the darkness as I quickly used my tongue to deal with a second one, which was by no means black really; that too was quickly sucked in. Our moans filled the room, silence retreating at our cosmic creation, as Big Dipper fought hard at the real possibility of imploding before an epic explosion due to the indomitable suction. Big Dipper freed itself as I wriggled frantically out between her legs to Lorraine’s protests. Cheekily, it gave Lorraine’s alleviated butt and inviting pussy a mocking thrust.
“Wait!!!!!!! Not so fast!!!!!”
Lorraine collapsed onto the bed, evading my lively Dipper, chuckling
“Are you crazy?”
Okamoto appeared out of nowhere as Lorraine ripped its wrapper and dragged it over the now throbbing Big Dipper. Lying down on the pillow, Lorraine parted her legs as I climbed onto her lured by her sweet alluring scent in the darkness.
“Oooo…”
Lorraine’s lips parted as Big Dipper was drawn North towards her South, sliding in snugly. Two universes met warily as we both moved slowly and in tune, and watched each other’s face in anticipation carefully. We rocked each other slowly and sensuously as she raised her legs to wrap them around me, limbo-ing to the tune of our moaning chorus, a melody familiar to only the two of us. I held both her hands up with one hand, playing her appealing bouncing tits with the other, and moved my nose to her armpits for a whiff of her sweating scent before giving it an intimate lick.
“Oh… Don’t stop please…”
Lorraine tilted her head away from me pleadingly, to which I replied into her exposed ear,
“I won’t baby… I’m not gonna…”
“You feel so good baby…”
I sighed as Lorraine’s lovehole contracted and gripped Big Dipper before loosening slightly rhythmically. With her beseeching demeanours willing me on, I increased my momentum as we both flew gradually into a frenzied dance.
I squeezed my eyes shut once again to the sight of the constellations as I had remembered them earlier exploding. We continued to gyrate with fervour and enthusiasm as sensations heightened.
“Oh Stan, harder please… please…”
Lorraine pleaded encouragingly as her legs pulled me deeper into her while I kept silent and intent on satisfying my goddess.
Heightened the sensations did, as we moaned and gasped quickly in mutual reply, elevating to an exalting high as I felt shudders within her. Big Dipper was now drawn deeply in; it struggled in futile to free itself, only to be sucked right in deeper than it had remembered itself to be.
Okamoto’s good… I thought silently, impressed. Was that an explosion?
Too small to be one, as I felt a single throb just as Lorraine quickly shoved me aside, panting, and ejecting Big Dipper from deep within her.
“That was close!”
She laughed exclaiming.
Nope, I didn’t cum; Neither did Big Dipper explode with bursting energy flying outwards in all directions nor was a new universe created as a result of a Big Bang.
But Okamoto had burst as it couldn’t withstand all that cosmic energy despite pictures depicting it to be able to endure bananas and bamboos.
Story Continued… 9 a.m… Till I cum…
I am now completely bewildered and in a daze. Sex with Lorraine thus far had been mind-blowing in its final minutes; I completely understand why now.
I watched as Lorraine rolled on the bed hysterically. Two drops of tears streamed down her cheeks from her amused eyes as she cracked a series of seemingly endless jokes and mock protests as well as accusations ranging from how my aggression broke the Okamoto to how I actually planned its breaking so as to own her.
“Tsk tsk tsk… You naughty boy…”
Lorraine teased with a waggling finger in the air before resuming her roll before putting a finger on her lips as the sounds of running footsteps stopped right outside our door.
“Shhh…”
She hushed.
We cuddled in silence as we strained our ears for signs of more sounds, or lives, outside our door. Lorraine’s body quivered slightly, either from the earlier orgasm or from her stifled giggles, as she laid on my chest.
“Liked how you felt in me?”
She whispered as she raised her head to look at me, her tone amative and tender.
I nodded to her persistent questions,
“Whatever does nodding means? Tell me TELL Meee….. How did I make you feel?”
Now, how does one answer a question like that? My lips parted nonetheless as I rubbed the tip of my nose against hers affectionately,
“Overwhelmed…”
I felt my deflated boner rising to its full form once again as we caressed each other cosily under the sheets. Confident that there wasn’t a sound outside, I inched away slightly to get off the bed.
“Where are you going?”
Lorraine laughed as she grabbed my arm.
“Upstairs? To get Durex… Its safer and more durable? I’m not exactly done here you know?”
I explained to a chuckling Lorraine.
“Yes! I know it is EXTRA SAFE! AND EXTREMELY DURABLE!”
Lorraine replied before falling momentarily silent. She gazed at my face with swivelling eyeballs as she examined me before continuing slowly, “But it’s already been so durable so far and I’m tired le…”
“Besides, don’t you wanna feel all of me? Like I’m really supposed to just make you feel?”
Lorraine flipped herself on me as she gave the tattered Okamoto a tug and dropped it on the floor.
“I wanna feel you without any barriers too… Since, oh well, I’m already yours I guess…”
A sea of sensations, and emotions, welled within me as I stifled my groans with a pillow as Lorraine climbed on; I have died, reincarnated and died one too many times in our relationship, and one too many times for the night. I died once more, as I felt my heart whirl into a complete stop from beating too fast and hard against, and finally ensnarled in my ribcage.
Our aggression came back, as I sat upright for awhile, carried her and did her against the wall with her planting kisses and bites all over for a while, setting her down and as she stood against the bedside cabinet for a very long while with my palms on auto-pilot around her and on her front while watching her very sexy back squirm in delight.
“Can you just cum!”
Lorraine gasped and panted, as we finally returned to the warmth of our sheets with her on all fours,
“I give up!?!?!”
I shook my head and sang cheekily,
“Take all your big plans and break ’em… This is bound to be awhile…”
Lorraine collapsed onto bed. Grabbing the sheets, she wrapped them around her as she turned to aside and drifted into a sleep, murmuring in jest,
“Ok, Ok… I’m convinced its really gonna be and bound to be awhile… Let’s carry on tomorrow…”
I rested my head on Lorraine’s shoulders as I hugged her from behind, lulled into a gentle sleep as well by the sweet scent of her hair and neck; The gentlest of sleeps as vivid and lucid scenes of that night played on in my dreams.
I stirred to consciousness once more as the first light streamed in from the bay window, and with Lorraine’s hair tickling my nostrils. I watched Lorraine fondly as breathed and gave a series of soft snores, the side of her body rising and falling mildly as she dozed on. That was the 1st time I’d seen Lorraine sleep, so beautifully and peacefully.
I was convinced then, that Lorraine would be the hottest lady ever I’d ever get to feel, taste and fuck.
I moved my hands once more, as I pecked her affectionately on her neck. She was still wet, my erected morning glory simply slid in with ease from behind her as she laid on 1 side.
“Good morning…”
Lorraine smiled as she slowly stirred from her sleep, her eyes half-opened and with a blur look, and turned her head to give me a kiss.
“Can’t you wait?”
Lorraine’s body convulsed amorously as she asked me for the time,
“Mmmm…. So early? Ahhhh…”
Early morning, sex was slow just like the new Sun of the day. Light crept into the world and into our room slowly, as slowly as the sex Lorraine and I were now sharing, as birds (the ones outside of course) chirped and chattered scandalously to our sensuous, erotic, moans; Fresh smell of morning dew outside, an even fresher smell of cum in the room as Big Dipper exploded on her abdomen after all while unable to hold back or resist any further. The explosion was magnificent, the aftermath meek and not so as it throbbed and twitched submissively on her body, like a gasping fish out of water, as Lorraine rubbed her eyes and smiled.
“Finally…”
Lorraine smiled…
“Now would please get me some tissues?”
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Originally Posted by
xiaosiong
Seems like they will be doing it raw soon.. Hehehe
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Originally Posted by
callmebad
didn’t cum but condom broke, aiyah must as well don’t wear?!
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Originally Posted by
n30pr0n
Precum, and protection from STD. You’ll never know.
Might as well only put on seatbelts when you anticipate the car you’re driving is going to crash. :P
Kidding.
Couldn’t respond to all you bros as it’d have spoilt the story. Yes Bro xiaosiong, we ended up doing it raw. We didn’t intend for it to happen, it just did on the spur of the moment I guess… a series of many 1sts that night: 1st time we shared a ciggie, 1st time we had sex, and 1st time we did it raw… so that night was quite a game changer for the both of us I guess…
Having said that, I still need to reiterate that I don’t feel it is right. Please exercise due precautions… Raw is War after all… seriously.
Bro Totally, thanks for your song. I’m a major fan of Green Day! Er… think my story is turning into a Broadway Musical btw…
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SammyNewbie
I just came to lend my support and show I am still here and happily reading. Thanks for writing all of this.
Yes Bro, your sppt has been invaluable. So I finally laid Lorraine huh? lol…